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    6: <body><p><b>Corrections</b>
    7: 
    8: <p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of
    9: the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors in the text,
   10: feel free open a <a href="bugs.html">bug</a> with a report of the problem, post a message in the User Notes 
   11: section on the chapter pages, or send a message to the <a
   12: href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.
   13: 
   14: <p><b>Note:</b> All errors in the text and examples are shown in <b class="broken">red</b> and all corrections are shown in <b
   15: class="fixed">green</b>.
   16: 
   17: <a name="preface"></a>
   18: <p><b>Preface</b>
   19: 
   20: <ul>
   21: 
   22: <li>On page ix: '<b class="broken">other browsers such as Galeon and Chimera</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">other browsers 
   23: such as Galeon and Camino</b>'<br><br>
   24: 
   25: <li>On page xiv: '<b class="broken">http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/</b>' has been changed
   26: to '<b class="fixed">http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/</b>'<br><br>
   27: 
   28: <li>On page xvii: '<b class="broken">David Hyatt and Mike Pinkerton for the Chimera browser</b>' has been changed to '<b
   29: class="fixed">David Hyatt and Mike Pinkerton for the Camino browser</b>'<br><br>
   30: 
   31: </ul>
   32: 
   33: 
   34: <a name="ch1"></a>
   35: <p><b>Chapter 1</b>
   36: 
   37: <ul>
   38: 
   39: <li>On page 2: In sidebar '<b class="broken">like Chimera (an ultra-fast browser that works only on Mac OS X)</b>' has been changed to 
   40: '<b class="fixed">like Camino (an ultra-fast browser that works only on Mac OS X)</b>'<br><br>
   41: 
   42: <li>On page 7: In sidebar '<b class="broken">Another project, call m/b (short for mozilla/browser), addresses shortcomings</b>' has
   43: been changed to '<b class="fixed">The Phoenix project (http://www.mozilla.org/projects/phoenix/) also addresses
   44: shortcomings</b>'<br><br>
   45: 
   46: <li>On page 7: In sidebar '<b class="broken">Some examples include Chimera (http://chimera.mozdev.org)</b>' has been changed to '<b 
   47: class="fixed">Some examples include Camino (http://www.mozilla.org/projects/camino/)</b>'<br><br>
   48: 
   49: <li>On page 7: '<b class="broken">applications web built using XPFE</b>' has been
   50: changed to '<b class="fixed">applications built using XPFE</b>'<br><br>
   51: 
   52: </ul>
   53: 
   54: 
   55: <a name="ch2"></a>
   56: <p><b>Chapter 2</b>
   57: 
   58: <ul>
   59: 
   60: <li>On page 10: Added a new sentence to the end of the 2nd paragraph of the xFly examples sidebar: '<b class="fixed">An installable version
   61: of the complete xFly application can be found at http://xfly.mozdev.org.</b>'<br><br>
   62: 
   63: <li>On page 12: '<b class="broken">&lt;window
   64: xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"  
   65: /&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;window
   66: xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>'<br><br>
   67: 
   68: <li>On page 14: In first code sample from Windows features section, '<b
   69: class="broken">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b
   70: class="fixed">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"</b>'<br><br>
   71: 
   72: <li>On page 17: '<b class="broken">selecting File > Open File > from</b>' has been
   73: changed to '<b class="fixed">selecting File > Open File from</b>'<br><br>
   74: 
   75: <li>On page 20: '<b class="broken">CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function</b>' has been changed
   76: to '<b class="fixed">CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function</b>'<br><br>
   77: 
   78: </ul>
   79: 
   80: 
   81: <a name="ch3"></a>
   82: <p><b>Chapter 3</b>
   83: 
   84: <ul>
   85: 
   86: <li>On page 34: '<b class="broken">We've packed a lot information in this chapter and it be a useful reference</b>' has been changed
   87: to '<b class="fixed">We've packed a lot of information in this chapter and it will be a useful reference</b>'<br><br>
   88: 
   89: <li>On page 35: '<b class="broken">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[i];</b>' has been changed to '<b 
   90: class="fixed">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[I];</b>'<br><br>
   91: 
   92: <li>On page 40: '<b class="broken">&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"
   93: oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;toolbarbutton
   94: id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt</b>'<br><br>
   95: 
   96: <li>On page 51: '<b class="broken">&lt;decription&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/decription&gt;</b>' has been 
   97: changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;description&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/description&gt;</b>'<br><br>
   98: 
   99: <li>On pages 58 and 59: Example 3-15 has been changed to (note the addition of spaces to seperate values)
  100: 
  101: <xmp class="fixed">
  102: <?xml version="1.0"?>
  103: <window id="hello-goodbye"
  104:     title="Hello Goodbye"
  105:     xmlns:html="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
  106:     xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"
  107:     style="min-width:100px;min-height:100px;background-color:white;">
  108:   <broadcasterset id="broadcasterset">
  109:     <broadcaster id="cmd_hello" oncommand="alert('Hello There!');"/>
  110:   </broadcasterset>
  111:   <keyset id="keyset">
  112:     <key id="key_h" key="H" observes="cmd_hello" modifiers="accel,shift" />
  113:     <key id="key_g" key="G" command="cmd_goodbye" modifiers="accel,shift" />
  114:   </keyset>
  115:   <commandset id="commandset">
  116:     <command id="cmd_goodbye" oncommand="alert('Goodbye!');" />
  117:   </commandset>
  118:   <spacer flex="1"/>
  119:   <label value="hello/goodbye"/>
  120:   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+h"/>
  121:   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+g"/>
  122:   <spacer flex="1"/>
  123: </window>
  124: </xmp>
  125: 
  126: </ul>
  127: 
  128: 
  129: <a name="ch4"></a>
  130: <p><b>Chapter 4</b>
  131: 
  132: <ul>
  133: 
  134: <li>On page 88: '<b class="broken">these are selectors are identical</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">these selectors are 
  135: identical</b>'<br><br>
  136: 
  137: <li>On page 109: '<b class="broken">The chome URL that the -moz-binding property points to</b>' has been changed to '<b
  138: class="fixed">The chrome URL that the -moz-binding property points to</b>'<br><br>
  139: 
  140: </ul>
  141: 
  142: 
  143: <a name="ch5"></a>
  144: <p><b>Chapter 5</b>
  145: 
  146: <ul>
  147: 
  148: <li>On page 113: Javascript 1.5 reference link in footnote has been changed from 
  149: '<b class="broken">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/js/core/jsref15/contents.html</b>' to
  150: '<b class="fixed">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/index.html?content=javascript.html</b>'<br><br>
  151: </li>
  152: 
  153: <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">&lt;/script.</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;/script&gt;</b>'<br><br>
  154: </li>
  155: 
  156: <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">dump(l+'\n');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">dump(len+'\n');</b>'<br><br>
  157: </li>
  158: 
  159: <li>On page 135: Example 5-11 has been changed to
  160: <xmp class="fixed">
  161: 
  162:   <head>
  163:     <title>Sound Service Play Example</title>
  164:     <script>  
  165:       function play() { 
  166:         netscape.security.PrivilegeManager.enablePrivilege("UniversalXPConnect"); 
  167:         var sample = Components.classes["@mozilla.org/sound;1"].createInstance(); 
  168:         sample = sample.QueryInterface(Components.interfaces.nsISound); 
  169:         const SND_NETWORK_STD_CID = "@mozilla.org/network/standard-url;1";
  170:         const SND_I_URL           = "nsIURL";
  171:         const SND_URL             = new  C.Constructor(SND_NETWORK_STD_CID, SND_I_URL);
  172:         var url                   = new SND_URL();
  173:         url.spec                  = 'http://jslib.mozdev.org/test.wav';
  174:         sample.play(url);
  175:       } 
  176:     </script>  
  177:   </head>  
  178:     
  179:     <form name="form">  
  180:       <input type="button" value="Play Sound" onclick="play();">  
  181:     </form>  
  182: 
  183: </xmp>
  184: 
  185: <li>On page 137: '<b class="broken">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1";</b>' 
  186:   has been changed to 
  187: '<b class="fixed">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1"];</b>'<br><br>
  188: </li>
  189: 
  190: <li>On page 140: '<b class="broken">js> load(`chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">js>
  191: load('chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>'<br><br>
  192: </li>
  193: 
  194:   </ul>
  195: 
  196: <a name="ch08"></a>
  197: <p><b>Chapter 8</b>
  198: 
  199: <ul>
  200: 
  201: <li>On page 211: In 2nd sentence of paragraph '<b class="broken">QueryInterace</b>' has been changed to '<b 
  202: class="fixed">QueryInterface</b>'<br><br>
  203: 
  204: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 '<b class="broken">mName: "a default value"</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">mName: "a default 
  205: value",</b>'<br><br>
  206: 
  207: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4
  208: 
  209:             <xmp class="broken">
  210:               this.myCID,
  211:               "My JS Component",
  212:               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
  213:               location, true, true,
  214:               type);
  215:             </xmp>            
  216: 
  217: has been changed to
  218: 
  219:             <xmp class="fixed">            
  220:               compMgr.registerComponentWithType(
  221:               this.myCID,
  222:               "My JS Component",
  223:               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
  224:               location, true, true,
  225:               type);
  226:             </xmp>            
  227: 
  228: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">dump(" ***** Registering: Simple JS component!
  229: ****\n");</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
  230: 
  231: <li>On page 223: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">if (outer != null)</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
  232: 
  233: <li>On page 239: Example 8-15 has been changed to <br/>
  234: 
  235: <xmp class="fixed">
  236: DEPTH         = ../../..
  237: topsrcdir     = ../../..
  238: srcdir        = .
  239: VPATH         = .
  240: 
  241: include $(DEPTH)/config/autoconf.mk
  242: 
  243: MODULE        = xpcom
  244: XPIDL_MODULE  = simple
  245: LIBRARY_NAME  = simple
  246: IS_COMPONENT  = 1
  247: MODULE_NAME   = nsSimpleModule
  248: REQUIRES      = string \
  249:                 xpcom \
  250:                 $(NULL)
  251: 
  252: 
  253: CPPSRCS   =              \
  254:     nsSimple.cpp         \
  255:     nsSimpleModule.cpp   \
  256:     $(NULL)
  257: 
  258: XPIDLSRCS = nsISimple.idl
  259: 
  260: include $(topsrcdir)/config/config.mk
  261: 
  262: LIBS    +=        \
  263:     $(XPCOM_LIBS) \
  264:     $(NSPR_LIBS)  \
  265:     $(NULL)
  266: 
  267: include $(topsrcdir)/config/rules.mk
  268: 
  269: EXTRA_DSO_LDOPTS += $(MOZ_COMPONENT_LIBS)
  270: 
  271: install:: $(TARGETS)
  272: </xmp>
  273: 
  274: </ul>
  275: 
  276: <a name="ch9"></a>
  277: <p><b>Chapter 9</b>
  278: 
  279: <ul>
  280: 
  281: <li>On page 257: In Example 9-7
  282: 
  283: <xmp class="broken">
  284: 	<triple subject="?listitem"
  285:     		predicate=" http://xfly.mozdev.org/fly-rdf#location"
  286:     		object="?location"/>
  287: </xmp>
  288: 
  289: has been changed to
  290: 
  291: <xmp class="fixed">
  292:         <triple subject="?listitem"
  293:     		predicate="fly-location#location"
  294:                 object="?location"/>
  295: </xmp>
  296: 
  297: </ul>
  298: 
  299: <a name="ch10"></a>
  300: <p><b>Chapter 10</b>
  301: 
  302: <ul>
  303: 
  304: <li>On page 280: In Table 10-3 '<b class="broken">Mostly used for retrieving, datasources, resources, and literals.</b>' has been
  305: changed to '<b class="fixed">Mostly used for retrieving datasources, resources, and literals.</b>'<br><br>
  306: 
  307: <li>On page 297: '<b class="broken">http://www.jslib.mozdev.org</b>' has been changed to '<b
  308: class="fixed">http://jslib.mozdev.org</b>'<br><br>
  309: 
  310: </ul>
  311: 
  312: 
  313: <a name="ch11"></a>
  314: <p><b>Chapter 11</b>
  315: 
  316: <ul> 
  317: <li>On page 314: In Example 11-5 and Example 11-6 '<b class="broken">var linetext =
  318: document.createTextNode(messageParagraphs[i]);</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">var linetext =
  319: document.createTextNode(lines[i]);</b>'<br><br>
  320: </ul>
  321: 
  322: 
  323: <a name="ch12"></a>
  324: <p><b>Chapter 12</b>
  325: 
  326: <ul>
  327: 
  328: <li>On page 336: In Example 12-6
  329: 
  330: <xmp class="broken">
  331:  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
  332:  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
  333:    print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
  334: </xmp>
  335: 
  336: has been changed to (note the difference in indentation and in using a single quote versus a backtick)
  337: 
  338: <xmp class="fixed">
  339:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
  340:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
  341:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
  342: </xmp>
  343: 
  344: <li>On page 339: A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital
  345: Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a
  346: href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>
  347: </li>
  348: 
  349: </ul>
  350: 
  351: 
  352: <a name="appa"></a>
  353: <p><b>Appendix A</b>
  354: 
  355: <ul>
  356: 
  357: <li>On page 365: '<b class="broken">http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml</b>' has been changed to '<b
  358: class="fixed">http://www.mozilla.org/source.html</b>'<br><br>
  359: 
  360: </ul>
  361: 
  362: <br><br>
  363: 
  364: <!-- ?php require(NOTES); ? -->
  365: <?php $post_to_list=NO; $author='reviewers@mozdev.org'; $target_page='corrections'; require(NOTES); ?>
  366:   
  367: </html>
  368: </xmp>
  369: 
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