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1.75      eric        6: <body><p><b>Corrections</b>
1.1       david       7: 
1.21      david       8: <p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of
1.19      david       9: the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors in the text,
1.22      david      10: feel free open a <a href="bugs.html">bug</a> with a report of the problem, post a message in the User Notes 
                     11: section on the chapter pages, or send a message to the <a
1.19      david      12: href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.
1.1       david      13: 
1.56      david      14: <p><b>Note:</b> All errors in the text and examples are shown in <b class="broken">red</b> and all corrections are shown in <b
                     15: class="fixed">green</b>.
1.20      david      16: 
1.75      eric       17: <a name="preface"></a>
1.20      david      18: <p><b>Preface</b>
                     19: 
1.1       david      20: <ul>
1.18      david      21: 
1.80      david      22: <li>On page ix: '<b class="broken">other browsers such as Galeon and Chimera</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">other browsers 
                     23: such as Galeon and Camino</b>'<br><br>
                     24: 
1.51      petejc     25: <li>On page xiv: '<b class="broken">http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/</b>' has been changed
                     26: to '<b class="fixed">http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      27: 
1.84      david      28: <li>On page xvii: '<b class="broken">David McNamara, and Mark Hammond</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">David 
                     29: McNamara, Mark Hammond, Gary Frederick, and Andreas Halter</b>'<br><br>
                     30: 
1.80      david      31: <li>On page xvii: '<b class="broken">David Hyatt and Mike Pinkerton for the Chimera browser</b>' has been changed to '<b
                     32: class="fixed">David Hyatt and Mike Pinkerton for the Camino browser</b>'<br><br>
1.84      david      33: 
                     34: <li>On page xvii: '<b class="broken">including Kim Steckler, Rachel Oeschger, and Priscilla, Dylan, and Devon Collins</b>' has been
                     35: changed to '<b class="fixed">including Kim Steckler, Rachel Oeschger, Marjana Molan, Lia Molan King, and Priscilla, Dylan, and Devon
                     36: Collins</b>'<br><br>
1.80      david      37: 
1.20      david      38: </ul>
                     39: 
                     40: 
1.75      eric       41: <a name="ch1"></a>
1.20      david      42: <p><b>Chapter 1</b>
                     43: 
                     44: <ul>
                     45: 
1.80      david      46: <li>On page 2: In sidebar '<b class="broken">like Chimera (an ultra-fast browser that works only on Mac OS X)</b>' has been changed to 
                     47: '<b class="fixed">like Camino (an ultra-fast browser that works only on Mac OS X)</b>'<br><br>
                     48: 
1.74      david      49: <li>On page 7: In sidebar '<b class="broken">Another project, call m/b (short for mozilla/browser), addresses shortcomings</b>' has
                     50: been changed to '<b class="fixed">The Phoenix project (http://www.mozilla.org/projects/phoenix/) also addresses
                     51: shortcomings</b>'<br><br>
                     52: 
1.80      david      53: <li>On page 7: In sidebar '<b class="broken">Some examples include Chimera (http://chimera.mozdev.org)</b>' has been changed to '<b 
                     54: class="fixed">Some examples include Camino (http://www.mozilla.org/projects/camino/)</b>'<br><br>
1.74      david      55: 
1.53      david      56: <li>On page 7: '<b class="broken">applications web built using XPFE</b>' has been
                     57: changed to '<b class="fixed">applications built using XPFE</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      58: 
1.20      david      59: </ul>
                     60: 
                     61: 
1.75      eric       62: <a name="ch2"></a>
1.20      david      63: <p><b>Chapter 2</b>
                     64: 
                     65: <ul>
                     66: 
1.57      david      67: <li>On page 10: Added a new sentence to the end of the 2nd paragraph of the xFly examples sidebar: '<b class="fixed">An installable version
1.58      david      68: of the complete xFly application can be found at http://xfly.mozdev.org.</b>'<br><br>
1.57      david      69: 
1.53      david      70: <li>On page 12: '<b class="broken">&lt;window
1.18      david      71: xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"  
1.53      david      72: /&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;window
                     73: xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      74: 
1.64      david      75: <li>On page 14: In first code sample from Windows features section, '<b
                     76: class="broken">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b
                     77: class="fixed">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      78: 
1.53      david      79: <li>On page 17: '<b class="broken">selecting File > Open File > from</b>' has been
                     80: changed to '<b class="fixed">selecting File > Open File from</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      81: 
1.53      david      82: <li>On page 20: '<b class="broken">CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function</b>' has been changed
                     83: to '<b class="fixed">CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function</b>'<br><br>
1.19      david      84: 
1.86      david      85: <li>On page 25: '<b class="broken">Under that directory, create the three new directories, <i>content</i>, <i>locale</i>, and <i>skin</i>, as
1.88    ! david      86: shown in Figure 2-5.</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">Under that directory, create the three new directories, <i>content</i>,
1.86      david      87: <i>locale</i>, and <i>skin</i>, as shown in Figure 2-5. The <i>locale</i> directory will have the default 'en-US' language pack
1.87      david      88: structure.</b>'<br><br>
1.86      david      89: 
                     90: <li>On page 31: In Example 2-14 '<b class="broken">locale/</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">locale/en-US/</b>'<br><br>
                     91: 
                     92: <li>On page 32: In Example 2-15 '<b class="broken">locale,install,url,resource:/chrome/xfly/locale/</b>' has been changed to '<b
                     93: class="fixed">locale,install,url,resource:/chrome/xfly/locale/en-US/</b>'<br><br>
                     94: 
1.20      david      95: </ul>
                     96: 
                     97: 
1.75      eric       98: <a name="ch3"></a>
1.20      david      99: <p><b>Chapter 3</b>
                    100: 
                    101: <ul>
                    102: 
1.67      david     103: <li>On page 34: '<b class="broken">We've packed a lot information in this chapter and it be a useful reference</b>' has been changed
                    104: to '<b class="fixed">We've packed a lot of information in this chapter and it will be a useful reference</b>'<br><br>
1.66      david     105: 
1.71      david     106: <li>On page 35: '<b class="broken">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[i];</b>' has been changed to '<b 
                    107: class="fixed">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[I];</b>'<br><br>
                    108: 
1.54      david     109: <li>On page 40: '<b class="broken">&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"
                    110: oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;toolbarbutton
                    111: id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david     112: 
1.65      david     113: <li>On page 51: '<b class="broken">&lt;decription&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/decription&gt;</b>' has been 
                    114: changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;description&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/description&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.71      david     115: 
                    116: <li>On pages 58 and 59: Example 3-15 has been changed to (note the addition of spaces to seperate values)
                    117: 
                    118: <xmp class="fixed">
                    119: <?xml version="1.0"?>
                    120: <window id="hello-goodbye"
                    121:     title="Hello Goodbye"
                    122:     xmlns:html="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
                    123:     xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"
                    124:     style="min-width:100px;min-height:100px;background-color:white;">
                    125:   <broadcasterset id="broadcasterset">
                    126:     <broadcaster id="cmd_hello" oncommand="alert('Hello There!');"/>
                    127:   </broadcasterset>
                    128:   <keyset id="keyset">
                    129:     <key id="key_h" key="H" observes="cmd_hello" modifiers="accel,shift" />
                    130:     <key id="key_g" key="G" command="cmd_goodbye" modifiers="accel,shift" />
                    131:   </keyset>
                    132:   <commandset id="commandset">
                    133:     <command id="cmd_goodbye" oncommand="alert('Goodbye!');" />
                    134:   </commandset>
                    135:   <spacer flex="1"/>
                    136:   <label value="hello/goodbye"/>
                    137:   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+h"/>
                    138:   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+g"/>
                    139:   <spacer flex="1"/>
                    140: </window>
                    141: </xmp>
1.65      david     142: 
1.20      david     143: </ul>
                    144: 
1.72      david     145: 
1.75      eric      146: <a name="ch4"></a>
1.72      david     147: <p><b>Chapter 4</b>
                    148: 
                    149: <ul>
                    150: 
                    151: <li>On page 88: '<b class="broken">these are selectors are identical</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">these selectors are 
                    152: identical</b>'<br><br>
                    153: 
1.73      david     154: <li>On page 109: '<b class="broken">The chome URL that the -moz-binding property points to</b>' has been changed to '<b
                    155: class="fixed">The chrome URL that the -moz-binding property points to</b>'<br><br>
                    156: 
1.72      david     157: </ul>
                    158: 
                    159: 
1.75      eric      160: <a name="ch5"></a>
1.26      petejc    161: <p><b>Chapter 5</b>
                    162: 
                    163: <ul>
1.40      david     164: 
                    165: <li>On page 113: Javascript 1.5 reference link in footnote has been changed from 
1.54      david     166: '<b class="broken">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/js/core/jsref15/contents.html</b>' to
                    167: '<b class="fixed">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/index.html?content=javascript.html</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    168: </li>
1.40      david     169: 
1.54      david     170: <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">&lt;/script.</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;/script&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    171: </li>
1.41      david     172: 
1.54      david     173: <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">dump(l+'\n');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">dump(len+'\n');</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    174: </li>
1.41      david     175: 
1.61      david     176: <li>On page 135: Example 5-11 has been changed to
                    177: <xmp class="fixed">
1.75      eric      178: 
1.59      petejc    179:   <head>
                    180:     <title>Sound Service Play Example</title>
                    181:     <script>  
                    182:       function play() { 
                    183:         netscape.security.PrivilegeManager.enablePrivilege("UniversalXPConnect"); 
                    184:         var sample = Components.classes["@mozilla.org/sound;1"].createInstance(); 
                    185:         sample = sample.QueryInterface(Components.interfaces.nsISound); 
1.62      petejc    186:         const SND_NETWORK_STD_CID = "@mozilla.org/network/standard-url;1";
                    187:         const SND_I_URL           = "nsIURL";
                    188:         const SND_URL             = new  C.Constructor(SND_NETWORK_STD_CID, SND_I_URL);
                    189:         var url                   = new SND_URL();
                    190:         url.spec                  = 'http://jslib.mozdev.org/test.wav';
                    191:         sample.play(url);
1.59      petejc    192:       } 
                    193:     </script>  
                    194:   </head>  
1.75      eric      195:     
1.59      petejc    196:     <form name="form">  
                    197:       <input type="button" value="Play Sound" onclick="play();">  
1.63      petejc    198:     </form>  
1.76      brian     199: 
                    200: </xmp>
                    201: 
                    202: <li>On page 137: '<b class="broken">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1";</b>' 
                    203:   has been changed to 
1.61      david     204: '<b class="fixed">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1"];</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    205: </li>
1.43      david     206: 
1.54      david     207: <li>On page 140: '<b class="broken">js> load(`chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">js>
                    208: load('chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    209: </li>
1.43      david     210: 
1.85      david     211: </ul>
                    212: 
                    213: <a name="ch06"></a>
                    214: <p><b>Chapter 6</b>
                    215: 
                    216: <ul>
                    217: 
                    218: <li>On page 145: Example 6-1 has been changed to <br/>
                    219: 
                    220: <xmp class="fixed">
                    221: var myFile = "xFly.jar";
                    222: initInstall(                      // initialize the installation
                    223:   "Install xFly",                 // display name of installation
                    224:   "xFly",                         // package name
                    225:   "0.0.1",                        // version of install
                    226:   1);                             // flags - an optional argument, 
                    227:                                   // reserved for future use
                    228: f = getFolder("Chrome");         // specify a target directory
                    229: setPackageFolder(f);
                    230: addFile(myFile);                 // add software to the installation
                    231: registerChrome(
                    232:   PACKAGE | DELAYED_CHROME,       // chrome switch (i.e., type)
                    233:   getFolder("Chrome","xFly.jar"), // destination of package
                    234:   "content/xFly/");               // location of manifest in package
                    235: if (0 == getLastError( ))        // if there have been no errors:
                    236:   performInstall( );             // install "xfly.jar"
                    237: else                             // otherwise
                    238:   cancelInstall( );              // cancel the installation.
                    239: </xmp>
                    240: 
                    241: </ul>
                    242: 
1.75      eric      243: 
                    244: <a name="ch08"></a>
1.24      petejc    245: <p><b>Chapter 8</b>
                    246: 
                    247: <ul>
1.44      david     248: 
1.54      david     249: <li>On page 211: In 2nd sentence of paragraph '<b class="broken">QueryInterace</b>' has been changed to '<b 
                    250: class="fixed">QueryInterface</b>'<br><br>
1.44      david     251: 
1.54      david     252: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 '<b class="broken">mName: "a default value"</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">mName: "a default 
                    253: value",</b>'<br><br>
1.44      david     254: 
1.47      david     255: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4
1.45      david     256: 
1.54      david     257:             <xmp class="broken">
1.33      petejc    258:               this.myCID,
                    259:               "My JS Component",
                    260:               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
                    261:               location, true, true,
                    262:               type);
                    263:             </xmp>            
1.45      david     264: 
1.47      david     265: has been changed to
1.45      david     266: 
1.54      david     267:             <xmp class="fixed">            
1.33      petejc    268:               compMgr.registerComponentWithType(
                    269:               this.myCID,
                    270:               "My JS Component",
                    271:               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
                    272:               location, true, true,
                    273:               type);
                    274:             </xmp>            
1.45      david     275: 
1.68      david     276: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">dump(" ***** Registering: Simple JS component!
                    277: ****\n");</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
1.45      david     278: 
1.54      david     279: <li>On page 223: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">if (outer != null)</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
1.45      david     280: 
                    281: <li>On page 239: Example 8-15 has been changed to <br/>
1.25      petejc    282: 
1.54      david     283: <xmp class="fixed">
1.24      petejc    284: DEPTH         = ../../..
                    285: topsrcdir     = ../../..
                    286: srcdir        = .
                    287: VPATH         = .
                    288: 
                    289: include $(DEPTH)/config/autoconf.mk
                    290: 
                    291: MODULE        = xpcom
                    292: XPIDL_MODULE  = simple
                    293: LIBRARY_NAME  = simple
                    294: IS_COMPONENT  = 1
                    295: MODULE_NAME   = nsSimpleModule
                    296: REQUIRES      = string \
                    297:                 xpcom \
                    298:                 $(NULL)
                    299: 
                    300: 
                    301: CPPSRCS   =              \
                    302:     nsSimple.cpp         \
                    303:     nsSimpleModule.cpp   \
                    304:     $(NULL)
                    305: 
                    306: XPIDLSRCS = nsISimple.idl
                    307: 
                    308: include $(topsrcdir)/config/config.mk
                    309: 
                    310: LIBS    +=        \
                    311:     $(XPCOM_LIBS) \
                    312:     $(NSPR_LIBS)  \
                    313:     $(NULL)
                    314: 
                    315: include $(topsrcdir)/config/rules.mk
                    316: 
                    317: EXTRA_DSO_LDOPTS += $(MOZ_COMPONENT_LIBS)
                    318: 
                    319: install:: $(TARGETS)
1.25      petejc    320: </xmp>
1.24      petejc    321: 
                    322: </ul>
                    323: 
1.75      eric      324: <a name="ch9"></a>
                    325: <p><b>Chapter 9</b>
1.20      david     326: 
1.75      eric      327: <ul>
1.79      david     328: 
                    329: <li>On page 257: In Example 9-7
                    330: 
                    331: <xmp class="broken">
                    332:        <triple subject="?listitem"
                    333:                predicate=" http://xfly.mozdev.org/fly-rdf#location"
                    334:                object="?location"/>
                    335: </xmp>
                    336: 
                    337: has been changed to
                    338: 
                    339: <xmp class="fixed">
                    340:         <triple subject="?listitem"
                    341:                predicate="fly-location#location"
                    342:                 object="?location"/>
                    343: </xmp>
                    344: 
1.75      eric      345: </ul>
                    346: 
                    347: <a name="ch10"></a>
1.20      david     348: <p><b>Chapter 10</b>
                    349: 
                    350: <ul>
1.77      david     351: 
1.78      david     352: <li>On page 280: In Table 10-3 '<b class="broken">Mostly used for retrieving, datasources, resources, and literals.</b>' has been
                    353: changed to '<b class="fixed">Mostly used for retrieving datasources, resources, and literals.</b>'<br><br>
1.77      david     354: 
                    355: <li>On page 297: '<b class="broken">http://www.jslib.mozdev.org</b>' has been changed to '<b
                    356: class="fixed">http://jslib.mozdev.org</b>'<br><br>
                    357: 
1.68      david     358: </ul>
                    359: 
                    360: 
1.75      eric      361: <a name="ch11"></a>
1.69      david     362: <p><b>Chapter 11</b>
1.68      david     363: 
1.70      david     364: <ul> 
                    365: <li>On page 314: In Example 11-5 and Example 11-6 '<b class="broken">var linetext =
                    366: document.createTextNode(messageParagraphs[i]);</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">var linetext =
                    367: document.createTextNode(lines[i]);</b>'<br><br>
1.20      david     368: </ul>
                    369: 
                    370: 
1.75      eric      371: <a name="ch12"></a>
1.20      david     372: <p><b>Chapter 12</b>
                    373: 
                    374: <ul>
                    375: 
1.47      david     376: <li>On page 336: In Example 12-6
1.20      david     377: 
1.54      david     378: <xmp class="broken">
1.38      petejc    379:  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
                    380:  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
                    381:    print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
1.47      david     382: </xmp>
                    383: 
1.48      david     384: has been changed to (note the difference in indentation and in using a single quote versus a backtick)
1.47      david     385: 
1.55      david     386: <xmp class="fixed">
1.48      david     387:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
                    388:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
1.38      petejc    389:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
                    390: </xmp>
1.47      david     391: 
1.81      david     392: <!--
1.47      david     393: <li>On page 339: A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital
                    394: Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a
                    395: href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>
1.38      petejc    396: </li>
1.81      david     397: -->
1.47      david     398: 
1.20      david     399: </ul>
                    400: 
                    401: 
1.75      eric      402: <a name="appa"></a>
1.20      david     403: <p><b>Appendix A</b>
                    404: 
                    405: <ul>
1.18      david     406: 
1.54      david     407: <li>On page 365: '<b class="broken">http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml</b>' has been changed to '<b
                    408: class="fixed">http://www.mozilla.org/source.html</b>'<br><br>
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