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1.75      eric        6: <body><p><b>Corrections</b>
1.1       david       7: 
1.21      david       8: <p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of
1.19      david       9: the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors in the text,
1.22      david      10: feel free open a <a href="bugs.html">bug</a> with a report of the problem, post a message in the User Notes 
                     11: section on the chapter pages, or send a message to the <a
1.19      david      12: href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.
1.1       david      13: 
1.56      david      14: <p><b>Note:</b> All errors in the text and examples are shown in <b class="broken">red</b> and all corrections are shown in <b
                     15: class="fixed">green</b>.
1.20      david      16: 
1.75      eric       17: <a name="preface"></a>
1.20      david      18: <p><b>Preface</b>
                     19: 
1.1       david      20: <ul>
1.18      david      21: 
1.80      david      22: <li>On page ix: '<b class="broken">other browsers such as Galeon and Chimera</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">other browsers 
                     23: such as Galeon and Camino</b>'<br><br>
                     24: 
1.51      petejc     25: <li>On page xiv: '<b class="broken">http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/</b>' has been changed
                     26: to '<b class="fixed">http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      27: 
1.84      david      28: <li>On page xvii: '<b class="broken">David McNamara, and Mark Hammond</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">David 
                     29: McNamara, Mark Hammond, Gary Frederick, and Andreas Halter</b>'<br><br>
                     30: 
1.80      david      31: <li>On page xvii: '<b class="broken">David Hyatt and Mike Pinkerton for the Chimera browser</b>' has been changed to '<b
                     32: class="fixed">David Hyatt and Mike Pinkerton for the Camino browser</b>'<br><br>
1.84      david      33: 
                     34: <li>On page xvii: '<b class="broken">including Kim Steckler, Rachel Oeschger, and Priscilla, Dylan, and Devon Collins</b>' has been
                     35: changed to '<b class="fixed">including Kim Steckler, Rachel Oeschger, Marjana Molan, Lia Molan King, and Priscilla, Dylan, and Devon
                     36: Collins</b>'<br><br>
1.80      david      37: 
1.20      david      38: </ul>
                     39: 
                     40: 
1.75      eric       41: <a name="ch1"></a>
1.20      david      42: <p><b>Chapter 1</b>
                     43: 
                     44: <ul>
                     45: 
1.80      david      46: <li>On page 2: In sidebar '<b class="broken">like Chimera (an ultra-fast browser that works only on Mac OS X)</b>' has been changed to 
                     47: '<b class="fixed">like Camino (an ultra-fast browser that works only on Mac OS X)</b>'<br><br>
                     48: 
1.74      david      49: <li>On page 7: In sidebar '<b class="broken">Another project, call m/b (short for mozilla/browser), addresses shortcomings</b>' has
                     50: been changed to '<b class="fixed">The Phoenix project (http://www.mozilla.org/projects/phoenix/) also addresses
                     51: shortcomings</b>'<br><br>
                     52: 
1.80      david      53: <li>On page 7: In sidebar '<b class="broken">Some examples include Chimera (http://chimera.mozdev.org)</b>' has been changed to '<b 
                     54: class="fixed">Some examples include Camino (http://www.mozilla.org/projects/camino/)</b>'<br><br>
1.74      david      55: 
1.53      david      56: <li>On page 7: '<b class="broken">applications web built using XPFE</b>' has been
                     57: changed to '<b class="fixed">applications built using XPFE</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      58: 
1.20      david      59: </ul>
                     60: 
                     61: 
1.75      eric       62: <a name="ch2"></a>
1.20      david      63: <p><b>Chapter 2</b>
                     64: 
                     65: <ul>
                     66: 
1.57      david      67: <li>On page 10: Added a new sentence to the end of the 2nd paragraph of the xFly examples sidebar: '<b class="fixed">An installable version
1.58      david      68: of the complete xFly application can be found at http://xfly.mozdev.org.</b>'<br><br>
1.57      david      69: 
1.53      david      70: <li>On page 12: '<b class="broken">&lt;window
1.18      david      71: xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"  
1.53      david      72: /&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;window
                     73: xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      74: 
1.64      david      75: <li>On page 14: In first code sample from Windows features section, '<b
                     76: class="broken">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b
                     77: class="fixed">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      78: 
1.53      david      79: <li>On page 17: '<b class="broken">selecting File > Open File > from</b>' has been
                     80: changed to '<b class="fixed">selecting File > Open File from</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      81: 
1.53      david      82: <li>On page 20: '<b class="broken">CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function</b>' has been changed
                     83: to '<b class="fixed">CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function</b>'<br><br>
1.19      david      84: 
1.20      david      85: </ul>
                     86: 
                     87: 
1.75      eric       88: <a name="ch3"></a>
1.20      david      89: <p><b>Chapter 3</b>
                     90: 
                     91: <ul>
                     92: 
1.67      david      93: <li>On page 34: '<b class="broken">We've packed a lot information in this chapter and it be a useful reference</b>' has been changed
                     94: to '<b class="fixed">We've packed a lot of information in this chapter and it will be a useful reference</b>'<br><br>
1.66      david      95: 
1.71      david      96: <li>On page 35: '<b class="broken">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[i];</b>' has been changed to '<b 
                     97: class="fixed">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[I];</b>'<br><br>
                     98: 
1.54      david      99: <li>On page 40: '<b class="broken">&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"
                    100: oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;toolbarbutton
                    101: id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david     102: 
1.65      david     103: <li>On page 51: '<b class="broken">&lt;decription&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/decription&gt;</b>' has been 
                    104: changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;description&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/description&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.71      david     105: 
                    106: <li>On pages 58 and 59: Example 3-15 has been changed to (note the addition of spaces to seperate values)
                    107: 
                    108: <xmp class="fixed">
                    109: <?xml version="1.0"?>
                    110: <window id="hello-goodbye"
                    111:     title="Hello Goodbye"
                    112:     xmlns:html="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
                    113:     xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"
                    114:     style="min-width:100px;min-height:100px;background-color:white;">
                    115:   <broadcasterset id="broadcasterset">
                    116:     <broadcaster id="cmd_hello" oncommand="alert('Hello There!');"/>
                    117:   </broadcasterset>
                    118:   <keyset id="keyset">
                    119:     <key id="key_h" key="H" observes="cmd_hello" modifiers="accel,shift" />
                    120:     <key id="key_g" key="G" command="cmd_goodbye" modifiers="accel,shift" />
                    121:   </keyset>
                    122:   <commandset id="commandset">
                    123:     <command id="cmd_goodbye" oncommand="alert('Goodbye!');" />
                    124:   </commandset>
                    125:   <spacer flex="1"/>
                    126:   <label value="hello/goodbye"/>
                    127:   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+h"/>
                    128:   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+g"/>
                    129:   <spacer flex="1"/>
                    130: </window>
                    131: </xmp>
1.65      david     132: 
1.20      david     133: </ul>
                    134: 
1.72      david     135: 
1.75      eric      136: <a name="ch4"></a>
1.72      david     137: <p><b>Chapter 4</b>
                    138: 
                    139: <ul>
                    140: 
                    141: <li>On page 88: '<b class="broken">these are selectors are identical</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">these selectors are 
                    142: identical</b>'<br><br>
                    143: 
1.73      david     144: <li>On page 109: '<b class="broken">The chome URL that the -moz-binding property points to</b>' has been changed to '<b
                    145: class="fixed">The chrome URL that the -moz-binding property points to</b>'<br><br>
                    146: 
1.72      david     147: </ul>
                    148: 
                    149: 
1.75      eric      150: <a name="ch5"></a>
1.26      petejc    151: <p><b>Chapter 5</b>
                    152: 
                    153: <ul>
1.40      david     154: 
                    155: <li>On page 113: Javascript 1.5 reference link in footnote has been changed from 
1.54      david     156: '<b class="broken">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/js/core/jsref15/contents.html</b>' to
                    157: '<b class="fixed">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/index.html?content=javascript.html</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    158: </li>
1.40      david     159: 
1.54      david     160: <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">&lt;/script.</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;/script&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    161: </li>
1.41      david     162: 
1.54      david     163: <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">dump(l+'\n');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">dump(len+'\n');</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    164: </li>
1.41      david     165: 
1.61      david     166: <li>On page 135: Example 5-11 has been changed to
                    167: <xmp class="fixed">
1.75      eric      168: 
1.59      petejc    169:   <head>
                    170:     <title>Sound Service Play Example</title>
                    171:     <script>  
                    172:       function play() { 
                    173:         netscape.security.PrivilegeManager.enablePrivilege("UniversalXPConnect"); 
                    174:         var sample = Components.classes["@mozilla.org/sound;1"].createInstance(); 
                    175:         sample = sample.QueryInterface(Components.interfaces.nsISound); 
1.62      petejc    176:         const SND_NETWORK_STD_CID = "@mozilla.org/network/standard-url;1";
                    177:         const SND_I_URL           = "nsIURL";
                    178:         const SND_URL             = new  C.Constructor(SND_NETWORK_STD_CID, SND_I_URL);
                    179:         var url                   = new SND_URL();
                    180:         url.spec                  = 'http://jslib.mozdev.org/test.wav';
                    181:         sample.play(url);
1.59      petejc    182:       } 
                    183:     </script>  
                    184:   </head>  
1.75      eric      185:     
1.59      petejc    186:     <form name="form">  
                    187:       <input type="button" value="Play Sound" onclick="play();">  
1.63      petejc    188:     </form>  
1.76      brian     189: 
                    190: </xmp>
                    191: 
                    192: <li>On page 137: '<b class="broken">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1";</b>' 
                    193:   has been changed to 
1.61      david     194: '<b class="fixed">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1"];</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    195: </li>
1.43      david     196: 
1.54      david     197: <li>On page 140: '<b class="broken">js> load(`chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">js>
                    198: load('chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    199: </li>
1.43      david     200: 
1.85    ! david     201: </ul>
        !           202: 
        !           203: <a name="ch06"></a>
        !           204: <p><b>Chapter 6</b>
        !           205: 
        !           206: <ul>
        !           207: 
        !           208: <li>On page 145: Example 6-1 has been changed to <br/>
        !           209: 
        !           210: <xmp class="fixed">
        !           211: var myFile = "xFly.jar";
        !           212: initInstall(                      // initialize the installation
        !           213:   "Install xFly",                 // display name of installation
        !           214:   "xFly",                         // package name
        !           215:   "0.0.1",                        // version of install
        !           216:   1);                             // flags - an optional argument, 
        !           217:                                   // reserved for future use
        !           218: f = getFolder("Chrome");         // specify a target directory
        !           219: setPackageFolder(f);
        !           220: addFile(myFile);                 // add software to the installation
        !           221: registerChrome(
        !           222:   PACKAGE | DELAYED_CHROME,       // chrome switch (i.e., type)
        !           223:   getFolder("Chrome","xFly.jar"), // destination of package
        !           224:   "content/xFly/");               // location of manifest in package
        !           225: if (0 == getLastError( ))        // if there have been no errors:
        !           226:   performInstall( );             // install "xfly.jar"
        !           227: else                             // otherwise
        !           228:   cancelInstall( );              // cancel the installation.
        !           229: </xmp>
        !           230: 
        !           231: </ul>
        !           232: 
1.75      eric      233: 
                    234: <a name="ch08"></a>
1.24      petejc    235: <p><b>Chapter 8</b>
                    236: 
                    237: <ul>
1.44      david     238: 
1.54      david     239: <li>On page 211: In 2nd sentence of paragraph '<b class="broken">QueryInterace</b>' has been changed to '<b 
                    240: class="fixed">QueryInterface</b>'<br><br>
1.44      david     241: 
1.54      david     242: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 '<b class="broken">mName: "a default value"</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">mName: "a default 
                    243: value",</b>'<br><br>
1.44      david     244: 
1.47      david     245: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4
1.45      david     246: 
1.54      david     247:             <xmp class="broken">
1.33      petejc    248:               this.myCID,
                    249:               "My JS Component",
                    250:               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
                    251:               location, true, true,
                    252:               type);
                    253:             </xmp>            
1.45      david     254: 
1.47      david     255: has been changed to
1.45      david     256: 
1.54      david     257:             <xmp class="fixed">            
1.33      petejc    258:               compMgr.registerComponentWithType(
                    259:               this.myCID,
                    260:               "My JS Component",
                    261:               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
                    262:               location, true, true,
                    263:               type);
                    264:             </xmp>            
1.45      david     265: 
1.68      david     266: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">dump(" ***** Registering: Simple JS component!
                    267: ****\n");</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
1.45      david     268: 
1.54      david     269: <li>On page 223: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">if (outer != null)</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
1.45      david     270: 
                    271: <li>On page 239: Example 8-15 has been changed to <br/>
1.25      petejc    272: 
1.54      david     273: <xmp class="fixed">
1.24      petejc    274: DEPTH         = ../../..
                    275: topsrcdir     = ../../..
                    276: srcdir        = .
                    277: VPATH         = .
                    278: 
                    279: include $(DEPTH)/config/autoconf.mk
                    280: 
                    281: MODULE        = xpcom
                    282: XPIDL_MODULE  = simple
                    283: LIBRARY_NAME  = simple
                    284: IS_COMPONENT  = 1
                    285: MODULE_NAME   = nsSimpleModule
                    286: REQUIRES      = string \
                    287:                 xpcom \
                    288:                 $(NULL)
                    289: 
                    290: 
                    291: CPPSRCS   =              \
                    292:     nsSimple.cpp         \
                    293:     nsSimpleModule.cpp   \
                    294:     $(NULL)
                    295: 
                    296: XPIDLSRCS = nsISimple.idl
                    297: 
                    298: include $(topsrcdir)/config/config.mk
                    299: 
                    300: LIBS    +=        \
                    301:     $(XPCOM_LIBS) \
                    302:     $(NSPR_LIBS)  \
                    303:     $(NULL)
                    304: 
                    305: include $(topsrcdir)/config/rules.mk
                    306: 
                    307: EXTRA_DSO_LDOPTS += $(MOZ_COMPONENT_LIBS)
                    308: 
                    309: install:: $(TARGETS)
1.25      petejc    310: </xmp>
1.24      petejc    311: 
                    312: </ul>
                    313: 
1.75      eric      314: <a name="ch9"></a>
                    315: <p><b>Chapter 9</b>
1.20      david     316: 
1.75      eric      317: <ul>
1.79      david     318: 
                    319: <li>On page 257: In Example 9-7
                    320: 
                    321: <xmp class="broken">
                    322:        <triple subject="?listitem"
                    323:                predicate=" http://xfly.mozdev.org/fly-rdf#location"
                    324:                object="?location"/>
                    325: </xmp>
                    326: 
                    327: has been changed to
                    328: 
                    329: <xmp class="fixed">
                    330:         <triple subject="?listitem"
                    331:                predicate="fly-location#location"
                    332:                 object="?location"/>
                    333: </xmp>
                    334: 
1.75      eric      335: </ul>
                    336: 
                    337: <a name="ch10"></a>
1.20      david     338: <p><b>Chapter 10</b>
                    339: 
                    340: <ul>
1.77      david     341: 
1.78      david     342: <li>On page 280: In Table 10-3 '<b class="broken">Mostly used for retrieving, datasources, resources, and literals.</b>' has been
                    343: changed to '<b class="fixed">Mostly used for retrieving datasources, resources, and literals.</b>'<br><br>
1.77      david     344: 
                    345: <li>On page 297: '<b class="broken">http://www.jslib.mozdev.org</b>' has been changed to '<b
                    346: class="fixed">http://jslib.mozdev.org</b>'<br><br>
                    347: 
1.68      david     348: </ul>
                    349: 
                    350: 
1.75      eric      351: <a name="ch11"></a>
1.69      david     352: <p><b>Chapter 11</b>
1.68      david     353: 
1.70      david     354: <ul> 
                    355: <li>On page 314: In Example 11-5 and Example 11-6 '<b class="broken">var linetext =
                    356: document.createTextNode(messageParagraphs[i]);</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">var linetext =
                    357: document.createTextNode(lines[i]);</b>'<br><br>
1.20      david     358: </ul>
                    359: 
                    360: 
1.75      eric      361: <a name="ch12"></a>
1.20      david     362: <p><b>Chapter 12</b>
                    363: 
                    364: <ul>
                    365: 
1.47      david     366: <li>On page 336: In Example 12-6
1.20      david     367: 
1.54      david     368: <xmp class="broken">
1.38      petejc    369:  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
                    370:  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
                    371:    print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
1.47      david     372: </xmp>
                    373: 
1.48      david     374: has been changed to (note the difference in indentation and in using a single quote versus a backtick)
1.47      david     375: 
1.55      david     376: <xmp class="fixed">
1.48      david     377:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
                    378:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
1.38      petejc    379:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
                    380: </xmp>
1.47      david     381: 
1.81      david     382: <!--
1.47      david     383: <li>On page 339: A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital
                    384: Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a
                    385: href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>
1.38      petejc    386: </li>
1.81      david     387: -->
1.47      david     388: 
1.20      david     389: </ul>
                    390: 
                    391: 
1.75      eric      392: <a name="appa"></a>
1.20      david     393: <p><b>Appendix A</b>
                    394: 
                    395: <ul>
1.18      david     396: 
1.54      david     397: <li>On page 365: '<b class="broken">http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml</b>' has been changed to '<b
                    398: class="fixed">http://www.mozilla.org/source.html</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david     399: 
1.1       david     400: </ul>
1.2       david     401: 
1.81      david     402: 
                    403: <a name="index"></a>
                    404: <p><b>Index</b>
                    405: 
                    406: <ul>
                    407: 
1.83      david     408: <li>On page 437: '<b class="broken">Chimera, 2</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">Camino, 2</b>'<br><br>
1.81      david     409: 
                    410: </ul>
1.75      eric      411: 
1.82      david     412: 
                    413: <br><br>
                    414: 
                    415: <!-- ?php require(NOTES); ? -->
                    416: <?php $post_to_list=NO; $author='reviewers@mozdev.org'; $target_page='corrections'; require(NOTES); ?>

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