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1.75      eric        6: <body><p><b>Corrections</b>
1.1       david       7: 
1.21      david       8: <p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of
1.19      david       9: the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors in the text,
1.22      david      10: feel free open a <a href="bugs.html">bug</a> with a report of the problem, post a message in the User Notes 
                     11: section on the chapter pages, or send a message to the <a
1.19      david      12: href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.
1.1       david      13: 
1.56      david      14: <p><b>Note:</b> All errors in the text and examples are shown in <b class="broken">red</b> and all corrections are shown in <b
                     15: class="fixed">green</b>.
1.20      david      16: 
1.75      eric       17: <a name="preface"></a>
1.20      david      18: <p><b>Preface</b>
                     19: 
1.1       david      20: <ul>
1.18      david      21: 
1.80      david      22: <li>On page ix: '<b class="broken">other browsers such as Galeon and Chimera</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">other browsers 
                     23: such as Galeon and Camino</b>'<br><br>
                     24: 
1.51      petejc     25: <li>On page xiv: '<b class="broken">http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/</b>' has been changed
                     26: to '<b class="fixed">http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      27: 
1.84    ! david      28: <li>On page xvii: '<b class="broken">David McNamara, and Mark Hammond</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">David 
        !            29: McNamara, Mark Hammond, Gary Frederick, and Andreas Halter</b>'<br><br>
        !            30: 
1.80      david      31: <li>On page xvii: '<b class="broken">David Hyatt and Mike Pinkerton for the Chimera browser</b>' has been changed to '<b
                     32: class="fixed">David Hyatt and Mike Pinkerton for the Camino browser</b>'<br><br>
1.84    ! david      33: 
        !            34: <li>On page xvii: '<b class="broken">including Kim Steckler, Rachel Oeschger, and Priscilla, Dylan, and Devon Collins</b>' has been
        !            35: changed to '<b class="fixed">including Kim Steckler, Rachel Oeschger, Marjana Molan, Lia Molan King, and Priscilla, Dylan, and Devon
        !            36: Collins</b>'<br><br>
1.80      david      37: 
1.20      david      38: </ul>
                     39: 
                     40: 
1.75      eric       41: <a name="ch1"></a>
1.20      david      42: <p><b>Chapter 1</b>
                     43: 
                     44: <ul>
                     45: 
1.80      david      46: <li>On page 2: In sidebar '<b class="broken">like Chimera (an ultra-fast browser that works only on Mac OS X)</b>' has been changed to 
                     47: '<b class="fixed">like Camino (an ultra-fast browser that works only on Mac OS X)</b>'<br><br>
                     48: 
1.74      david      49: <li>On page 7: In sidebar '<b class="broken">Another project, call m/b (short for mozilla/browser), addresses shortcomings</b>' has
                     50: been changed to '<b class="fixed">The Phoenix project (http://www.mozilla.org/projects/phoenix/) also addresses
                     51: shortcomings</b>'<br><br>
                     52: 
1.80      david      53: <li>On page 7: In sidebar '<b class="broken">Some examples include Chimera (http://chimera.mozdev.org)</b>' has been changed to '<b 
                     54: class="fixed">Some examples include Camino (http://www.mozilla.org/projects/camino/)</b>'<br><br>
1.74      david      55: 
1.53      david      56: <li>On page 7: '<b class="broken">applications web built using XPFE</b>' has been
                     57: changed to '<b class="fixed">applications built using XPFE</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      58: 
1.20      david      59: </ul>
                     60: 
                     61: 
1.75      eric       62: <a name="ch2"></a>
1.20      david      63: <p><b>Chapter 2</b>
                     64: 
                     65: <ul>
                     66: 
1.57      david      67: <li>On page 10: Added a new sentence to the end of the 2nd paragraph of the xFly examples sidebar: '<b class="fixed">An installable version
1.58      david      68: of the complete xFly application can be found at http://xfly.mozdev.org.</b>'<br><br>
1.57      david      69: 
1.53      david      70: <li>On page 12: '<b class="broken">&lt;window
1.18      david      71: xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"  
1.53      david      72: /&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;window
                     73: xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      74: 
1.64      david      75: <li>On page 14: In first code sample from Windows features section, '<b
                     76: class="broken">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b
                     77: class="fixed">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      78: 
1.53      david      79: <li>On page 17: '<b class="broken">selecting File > Open File > from</b>' has been
                     80: changed to '<b class="fixed">selecting File > Open File from</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      81: 
1.53      david      82: <li>On page 20: '<b class="broken">CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function</b>' has been changed
                     83: to '<b class="fixed">CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function</b>'<br><br>
1.19      david      84: 
1.20      david      85: </ul>
                     86: 
                     87: 
1.75      eric       88: <a name="ch3"></a>
1.20      david      89: <p><b>Chapter 3</b>
                     90: 
                     91: <ul>
                     92: 
1.67      david      93: <li>On page 34: '<b class="broken">We've packed a lot information in this chapter and it be a useful reference</b>' has been changed
                     94: to '<b class="fixed">We've packed a lot of information in this chapter and it will be a useful reference</b>'<br><br>
1.66      david      95: 
1.71      david      96: <li>On page 35: '<b class="broken">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[i];</b>' has been changed to '<b 
                     97: class="fixed">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[I];</b>'<br><br>
                     98: 
1.54      david      99: <li>On page 40: '<b class="broken">&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"
                    100: oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;toolbarbutton
                    101: id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david     102: 
1.65      david     103: <li>On page 51: '<b class="broken">&lt;decription&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/decription&gt;</b>' has been 
                    104: changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;description&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/description&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.71      david     105: 
                    106: <li>On pages 58 and 59: Example 3-15 has been changed to (note the addition of spaces to seperate values)
                    107: 
                    108: <xmp class="fixed">
                    109: <?xml version="1.0"?>
                    110: <window id="hello-goodbye"
                    111:     title="Hello Goodbye"
                    112:     xmlns:html="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
                    113:     xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"
                    114:     style="min-width:100px;min-height:100px;background-color:white;">
                    115:   <broadcasterset id="broadcasterset">
                    116:     <broadcaster id="cmd_hello" oncommand="alert('Hello There!');"/>
                    117:   </broadcasterset>
                    118:   <keyset id="keyset">
                    119:     <key id="key_h" key="H" observes="cmd_hello" modifiers="accel,shift" />
                    120:     <key id="key_g" key="G" command="cmd_goodbye" modifiers="accel,shift" />
                    121:   </keyset>
                    122:   <commandset id="commandset">
                    123:     <command id="cmd_goodbye" oncommand="alert('Goodbye!');" />
                    124:   </commandset>
                    125:   <spacer flex="1"/>
                    126:   <label value="hello/goodbye"/>
                    127:   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+h"/>
                    128:   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+g"/>
                    129:   <spacer flex="1"/>
                    130: </window>
                    131: </xmp>
1.65      david     132: 
1.20      david     133: </ul>
                    134: 
1.72      david     135: 
1.75      eric      136: <a name="ch4"></a>
1.72      david     137: <p><b>Chapter 4</b>
                    138: 
                    139: <ul>
                    140: 
                    141: <li>On page 88: '<b class="broken">these are selectors are identical</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">these selectors are 
                    142: identical</b>'<br><br>
                    143: 
1.73      david     144: <li>On page 109: '<b class="broken">The chome URL that the -moz-binding property points to</b>' has been changed to '<b
                    145: class="fixed">The chrome URL that the -moz-binding property points to</b>'<br><br>
                    146: 
1.72      david     147: </ul>
                    148: 
                    149: 
1.75      eric      150: <a name="ch5"></a>
1.26      petejc    151: <p><b>Chapter 5</b>
                    152: 
                    153: <ul>
1.40      david     154: 
                    155: <li>On page 113: Javascript 1.5 reference link in footnote has been changed from 
1.54      david     156: '<b class="broken">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/js/core/jsref15/contents.html</b>' to
                    157: '<b class="fixed">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/index.html?content=javascript.html</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    158: </li>
1.40      david     159: 
1.54      david     160: <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">&lt;/script.</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;/script&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    161: </li>
1.41      david     162: 
1.54      david     163: <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">dump(l+'\n');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">dump(len+'\n');</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    164: </li>
1.41      david     165: 
1.61      david     166: <li>On page 135: Example 5-11 has been changed to
                    167: <xmp class="fixed">
1.75      eric      168: 
1.59      petejc    169:   <head>
                    170:     <title>Sound Service Play Example</title>
                    171:     <script>  
                    172:       function play() { 
                    173:         netscape.security.PrivilegeManager.enablePrivilege("UniversalXPConnect"); 
                    174:         var sample = Components.classes["@mozilla.org/sound;1"].createInstance(); 
                    175:         sample = sample.QueryInterface(Components.interfaces.nsISound); 
1.62      petejc    176:         const SND_NETWORK_STD_CID = "@mozilla.org/network/standard-url;1";
                    177:         const SND_I_URL           = "nsIURL";
                    178:         const SND_URL             = new  C.Constructor(SND_NETWORK_STD_CID, SND_I_URL);
                    179:         var url                   = new SND_URL();
                    180:         url.spec                  = 'http://jslib.mozdev.org/test.wav';
                    181:         sample.play(url);
1.59      petejc    182:       } 
                    183:     </script>  
                    184:   </head>  
1.75      eric      185:     
1.59      petejc    186:     <form name="form">  
                    187:       <input type="button" value="Play Sound" onclick="play();">  
1.63      petejc    188:     </form>  
1.76      brian     189: 
                    190: </xmp>
                    191: 
                    192: <li>On page 137: '<b class="broken">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1";</b>' 
                    193:   has been changed to 
1.61      david     194: '<b class="fixed">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1"];</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    195: </li>
1.43      david     196: 
1.54      david     197: <li>On page 140: '<b class="broken">js> load(`chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">js>
                    198: load('chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    199: </li>
1.43      david     200: 
1.76      brian     201:   </ul>
1.75      eric      202: 
                    203: <a name="ch08"></a>
1.24      petejc    204: <p><b>Chapter 8</b>
                    205: 
                    206: <ul>
1.44      david     207: 
1.54      david     208: <li>On page 211: In 2nd sentence of paragraph '<b class="broken">QueryInterace</b>' has been changed to '<b 
                    209: class="fixed">QueryInterface</b>'<br><br>
1.44      david     210: 
1.54      david     211: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 '<b class="broken">mName: "a default value"</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">mName: "a default 
                    212: value",</b>'<br><br>
1.44      david     213: 
1.47      david     214: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4
1.45      david     215: 
1.54      david     216:             <xmp class="broken">
1.33      petejc    217:               this.myCID,
                    218:               "My JS Component",
                    219:               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
                    220:               location, true, true,
                    221:               type);
                    222:             </xmp>            
1.45      david     223: 
1.47      david     224: has been changed to
1.45      david     225: 
1.54      david     226:             <xmp class="fixed">            
1.33      petejc    227:               compMgr.registerComponentWithType(
                    228:               this.myCID,
                    229:               "My JS Component",
                    230:               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
                    231:               location, true, true,
                    232:               type);
                    233:             </xmp>            
1.45      david     234: 
1.68      david     235: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">dump(" ***** Registering: Simple JS component!
                    236: ****\n");</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
1.45      david     237: 
1.54      david     238: <li>On page 223: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">if (outer != null)</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
1.45      david     239: 
                    240: <li>On page 239: Example 8-15 has been changed to <br/>
1.25      petejc    241: 
1.54      david     242: <xmp class="fixed">
1.24      petejc    243: DEPTH         = ../../..
                    244: topsrcdir     = ../../..
                    245: srcdir        = .
                    246: VPATH         = .
                    247: 
                    248: include $(DEPTH)/config/autoconf.mk
                    249: 
                    250: MODULE        = xpcom
                    251: XPIDL_MODULE  = simple
                    252: LIBRARY_NAME  = simple
                    253: IS_COMPONENT  = 1
                    254: MODULE_NAME   = nsSimpleModule
                    255: REQUIRES      = string \
                    256:                 xpcom \
                    257:                 $(NULL)
                    258: 
                    259: 
                    260: CPPSRCS   =              \
                    261:     nsSimple.cpp         \
                    262:     nsSimpleModule.cpp   \
                    263:     $(NULL)
                    264: 
                    265: XPIDLSRCS = nsISimple.idl
                    266: 
                    267: include $(topsrcdir)/config/config.mk
                    268: 
                    269: LIBS    +=        \
                    270:     $(XPCOM_LIBS) \
                    271:     $(NSPR_LIBS)  \
                    272:     $(NULL)
                    273: 
                    274: include $(topsrcdir)/config/rules.mk
                    275: 
                    276: EXTRA_DSO_LDOPTS += $(MOZ_COMPONENT_LIBS)
                    277: 
                    278: install:: $(TARGETS)
1.25      petejc    279: </xmp>
1.24      petejc    280: 
                    281: </ul>
                    282: 
1.75      eric      283: <a name="ch9"></a>
                    284: <p><b>Chapter 9</b>
1.20      david     285: 
1.75      eric      286: <ul>
1.79      david     287: 
                    288: <li>On page 257: In Example 9-7
                    289: 
                    290: <xmp class="broken">
                    291:        <triple subject="?listitem"
                    292:                predicate=" http://xfly.mozdev.org/fly-rdf#location"
                    293:                object="?location"/>
                    294: </xmp>
                    295: 
                    296: has been changed to
                    297: 
                    298: <xmp class="fixed">
                    299:         <triple subject="?listitem"
                    300:                predicate="fly-location#location"
                    301:                 object="?location"/>
                    302: </xmp>
                    303: 
1.75      eric      304: </ul>
                    305: 
                    306: <a name="ch10"></a>
1.20      david     307: <p><b>Chapter 10</b>
                    308: 
                    309: <ul>
1.77      david     310: 
1.78      david     311: <li>On page 280: In Table 10-3 '<b class="broken">Mostly used for retrieving, datasources, resources, and literals.</b>' has been
                    312: changed to '<b class="fixed">Mostly used for retrieving datasources, resources, and literals.</b>'<br><br>
1.77      david     313: 
                    314: <li>On page 297: '<b class="broken">http://www.jslib.mozdev.org</b>' has been changed to '<b
                    315: class="fixed">http://jslib.mozdev.org</b>'<br><br>
                    316: 
1.68      david     317: </ul>
                    318: 
                    319: 
1.75      eric      320: <a name="ch11"></a>
1.69      david     321: <p><b>Chapter 11</b>
1.68      david     322: 
1.70      david     323: <ul> 
                    324: <li>On page 314: In Example 11-5 and Example 11-6 '<b class="broken">var linetext =
                    325: document.createTextNode(messageParagraphs[i]);</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">var linetext =
                    326: document.createTextNode(lines[i]);</b>'<br><br>
1.20      david     327: </ul>
                    328: 
                    329: 
1.75      eric      330: <a name="ch12"></a>
1.20      david     331: <p><b>Chapter 12</b>
                    332: 
                    333: <ul>
                    334: 
1.47      david     335: <li>On page 336: In Example 12-6
1.20      david     336: 
1.54      david     337: <xmp class="broken">
1.38      petejc    338:  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
                    339:  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
                    340:    print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
1.47      david     341: </xmp>
                    342: 
1.48      david     343: has been changed to (note the difference in indentation and in using a single quote versus a backtick)
1.47      david     344: 
1.55      david     345: <xmp class="fixed">
1.48      david     346:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
                    347:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
1.38      petejc    348:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
                    349: </xmp>
1.47      david     350: 
1.81      david     351: <!--
1.47      david     352: <li>On page 339: A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital
                    353: Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a
                    354: href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>
1.38      petejc    355: </li>
1.81      david     356: -->
1.47      david     357: 
1.20      david     358: </ul>
                    359: 
                    360: 
1.75      eric      361: <a name="appa"></a>
1.20      david     362: <p><b>Appendix A</b>
                    363: 
                    364: <ul>
1.18      david     365: 
1.54      david     366: <li>On page 365: '<b class="broken">http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml</b>' has been changed to '<b
                    367: class="fixed">http://www.mozilla.org/source.html</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david     368: 
1.1       david     369: </ul>
1.2       david     370: 
1.81      david     371: 
                    372: <a name="index"></a>
                    373: <p><b>Index</b>
                    374: 
                    375: <ul>
                    376: 
1.83      david     377: <li>On page 437: '<b class="broken">Chimera, 2</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">Camino, 2</b>'<br><br>
1.81      david     378: 
                    379: </ul>
1.75      eric      380: 
1.82      david     381: 
                    382: <br><br>
                    383: 
                    384: <!-- ?php require(NOTES); ? -->
                    385: <?php $post_to_list=NO; $author='reviewers@mozdev.org'; $target_page='corrections'; require(NOTES); ?>

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