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1.1       david       6: <p><b>Corrections</b>
                      7: 
1.21      david       8: <p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of
1.19      david       9: the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors in the text,
1.22      david      10: feel free open a <a href="bugs.html">bug</a> with a report of the problem, post a message in the User Notes 
                     11: section on the chapter pages, or send a message to the <a
1.19      david      12: href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.
1.1       david      13: 
1.56      david      14: <p><b>Note:</b> All errors in the text and examples are shown in <b class="broken">red</b> and all corrections are shown in <b
                     15: class="fixed">green</b>.
1.20      david      16: 
                     17: <a name="preface">
                     18: <p><b>Preface</b>
                     19: 
1.1       david      20: <ul>
1.18      david      21: 
1.51      petejc     22: <li>On page xiv: '<b class="broken">http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/</b>' has been changed
                     23: to '<b class="fixed">http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      24: 
1.20      david      25: </ul>
                     26: 
                     27: 
                     28: <a name="ch1">
                     29: <p><b>Chapter 1</b>
                     30: 
                     31: <ul>
                     32: 
1.53      david      33: <li>On page 7: '<b class="broken">applications web built using XPFE</b>' has been
                     34: changed to '<b class="fixed">applications built using XPFE</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      35: 
1.20      david      36: </ul>
                     37: 
                     38: 
                     39: <a name="ch2">
                     40: <p><b>Chapter 2</b>
                     41: 
                     42: <ul>
                     43: 
1.57      david      44: <li>On page 10: Added a new sentence to the end of the 2nd paragraph of the xFly examples sidebar: '<b class="fixed">An installable version
1.58      david      45: of the complete xFly application can be found at http://xfly.mozdev.org.</b>'<br><br>
1.57      david      46: 
1.53      david      47: <li>On page 12: '<b class="broken">&lt;window
1.18      david      48: xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"  
1.53      david      49: /&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;window
                     50: xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      51: 
1.64      david      52: <li>On page 14: In first code sample from Windows features section, '<b
                     53: class="broken">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b
                     54: class="fixed">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      55: 
1.53      david      56: <li>On page 17: '<b class="broken">selecting File > Open File > from</b>' has been
                     57: changed to '<b class="fixed">selecting File > Open File from</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      58: 
1.53      david      59: <li>On page 20: '<b class="broken">CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function</b>' has been changed
                     60: to '<b class="fixed">CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function</b>'<br><br>
1.19      david      61: 
1.20      david      62: </ul>
                     63: 
                     64: 
                     65: <a name="ch3">
                     66: <p><b>Chapter 3</b>
                     67: 
                     68: <ul>
                     69: 
1.67      david      70: <li>On page 34: '<b class="broken">We've packed a lot information in this chapter and it be a useful reference</b>' has been changed
                     71: to '<b class="fixed">We've packed a lot of information in this chapter and it will be a useful reference</b>'<br><br>
1.66      david      72: 
1.71      david      73: <li>On page 35: '<b class="broken">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[i];</b>' has been changed to '<b 
                     74: class="fixed">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[I];</b>'<br><br>
                     75: 
1.54      david      76: <li>On page 40: '<b class="broken">&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"
                     77: oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;toolbarbutton
                     78: id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      79: 
1.65      david      80: <li>On page 51: '<b class="broken">&lt;decription&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/decription&gt;</b>' has been 
                     81: changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;description&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/description&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.71      david      82: 
                     83: <li>On pages 58 and 59: Example 3-15 has been changed to (note the addition of spaces to seperate values)
                     84: 
                     85: <xmp class="fixed">
                     86: <?xml version="1.0"?>
                     87: <window id="hello-goodbye"
                     88:     title="Hello Goodbye"
                     89:     xmlns:html="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
                     90:     xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"
                     91:     style="min-width:100px;min-height:100px;background-color:white;">
                     92:   <broadcasterset id="broadcasterset">
                     93:     <broadcaster id="cmd_hello" oncommand="alert('Hello There!');"/>
                     94:   </broadcasterset>
                     95:   <keyset id="keyset">
                     96:     <key id="key_h" key="H" observes="cmd_hello" modifiers="accel,shift" />
                     97:     <key id="key_g" key="G" command="cmd_goodbye" modifiers="accel,shift" />
                     98:   </keyset>
                     99:   <commandset id="commandset">
                    100:     <command id="cmd_goodbye" oncommand="alert('Goodbye!');" />
                    101:   </commandset>
                    102:   <spacer flex="1"/>
                    103:   <label value="hello/goodbye"/>
                    104:   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+h"/>
                    105:   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+g"/>
                    106:   <spacer flex="1"/>
                    107: </window>
                    108: </xmp>
1.65      david     109: 
1.20      david     110: </ul>
                    111: 
1.72    ! david     112: 
        !           113: <a name="ch4">
        !           114: <p><b>Chapter 4</b>
        !           115: 
        !           116: <ul>
        !           117: 
        !           118: <li>On page 88: '<b class="broken">these are selectors are identical</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">these selectors are 
        !           119: identical</b>'<br><br>
        !           120: 
        !           121: </ul>
        !           122: 
        !           123: 
1.26      petejc    124: <a name="ch5">
                    125: <p><b>Chapter 5</b>
                    126: 
                    127: <ul>
1.40      david     128: 
                    129: <li>On page 113: Javascript 1.5 reference link in footnote has been changed from 
1.54      david     130: '<b class="broken">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/js/core/jsref15/contents.html</b>' to
                    131: '<b class="fixed">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/index.html?content=javascript.html</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    132: </li>
1.40      david     133: 
1.54      david     134: <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">&lt;/script.</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;/script&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    135: </li>
1.41      david     136: 
1.54      david     137: <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">dump(l+'\n');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">dump(len+'\n');</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    138: </li>
1.41      david     139: 
1.61      david     140: <li>On page 135: Example 5-11 has been changed to
                    141: <xmp class="fixed">
1.59      petejc    142: <html>
                    143:   <head>
                    144:     <title>Sound Service Play Example</title>
                    145:     <script>  
                    146:       function play() { 
                    147:         netscape.security.PrivilegeManager.enablePrivilege("UniversalXPConnect"); 
                    148:         var sample = Components.classes["@mozilla.org/sound;1"].createInstance(); 
                    149:         sample = sample.QueryInterface(Components.interfaces.nsISound); 
1.62      petejc    150:         const SND_NETWORK_STD_CID = "@mozilla.org/network/standard-url;1";
                    151:         const SND_I_URL           = "nsIURL";
                    152:         const SND_URL             = new  C.Constructor(SND_NETWORK_STD_CID, SND_I_URL);
                    153:         var url                   = new SND_URL();
                    154:         url.spec                  = 'http://jslib.mozdev.org/test.wav';
                    155:         sample.play(url);
1.59      petejc    156:       } 
                    157:     </script>  
                    158:   </head>  
                    159:   <body>  
                    160:     <form name="form">  
                    161:       <input type="button" value="Play Sound" onclick="play();">  
1.63      petejc    162:     </form>  
1.59      petejc    163:   </body>  
                    164: </html>
                    165: </xmp>
1.61      david     166: </li>
                    167: 
                    168: <li>On page 137: '<b class="broken">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1";</b>' has been changed to 
                    169: '<b class="fixed">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1"];</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    170: </li>
1.43      david     171: 
1.54      david     172: <li>On page 140: '<b class="broken">js> load(`chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">js>
                    173: load('chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    174: </li>
1.43      david     175: 
1.26      petejc    176: </ul>
                    177: 
1.24      petejc    178: <a name="ch08">
                    179: <p><b>Chapter 8</b>
                    180: 
                    181: <ul>
1.44      david     182: 
1.54      david     183: <li>On page 211: In 2nd sentence of paragraph '<b class="broken">QueryInterace</b>' has been changed to '<b 
                    184: class="fixed">QueryInterface</b>'<br><br>
1.44      david     185: 
1.54      david     186: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 '<b class="broken">mName: "a default value"</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">mName: "a default 
                    187: value",</b>'<br><br>
1.44      david     188: 
1.47      david     189: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4
1.45      david     190: 
1.54      david     191:             <xmp class="broken">
1.33      petejc    192:               this.myCID,
                    193:               "My JS Component",
                    194:               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
                    195:               location, true, true,
                    196:               type);
                    197:             </xmp>            
1.45      david     198: 
1.47      david     199: has been changed to
1.45      david     200: 
1.54      david     201:             <xmp class="fixed">            
1.33      petejc    202:               compMgr.registerComponentWithType(
                    203:               this.myCID,
                    204:               "My JS Component",
                    205:               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
                    206:               location, true, true,
                    207:               type);
                    208:             </xmp>            
1.45      david     209: 
1.68      david     210: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">dump(" ***** Registering: Simple JS component!
                    211: ****\n");</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
1.45      david     212: 
1.54      david     213: <li>On page 223: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">if (outer != null)</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
1.45      david     214: 
                    215: <li>On page 239: Example 8-15 has been changed to <br/>
1.25      petejc    216: 
1.54      david     217: <xmp class="fixed">
1.24      petejc    218: DEPTH         = ../../..
                    219: topsrcdir     = ../../..
                    220: srcdir        = .
                    221: VPATH         = .
                    222: 
                    223: include $(DEPTH)/config/autoconf.mk
                    224: 
                    225: MODULE        = xpcom
                    226: XPIDL_MODULE  = simple
                    227: LIBRARY_NAME  = simple
                    228: IS_COMPONENT  = 1
                    229: MODULE_NAME   = nsSimpleModule
                    230: REQUIRES      = string \
                    231:                 xpcom \
                    232:                 $(NULL)
                    233: 
                    234: 
                    235: CPPSRCS   =              \
                    236:     nsSimple.cpp         \
                    237:     nsSimpleModule.cpp   \
                    238:     $(NULL)
                    239: 
                    240: XPIDLSRCS = nsISimple.idl
                    241: 
                    242: include $(topsrcdir)/config/config.mk
                    243: 
                    244: LIBS    +=        \
                    245:     $(XPCOM_LIBS) \
                    246:     $(NSPR_LIBS)  \
                    247:     $(NULL)
                    248: 
                    249: include $(topsrcdir)/config/rules.mk
                    250: 
                    251: EXTRA_DSO_LDOPTS += $(MOZ_COMPONENT_LIBS)
                    252: 
                    253: install:: $(TARGETS)
1.25      petejc    254: </xmp>
1.24      petejc    255: 
                    256: </ul>
                    257: 
1.20      david     258: 
                    259: <a name="ch10">
                    260: <p><b>Chapter 10</b>
                    261: 
                    262: <ul>
1.54      david     263: <li>On page 297: '<b class="broken">http://www.jslib.mozdev.org</b>' has been changed
                    264: to '<b class="fixed">http://jslib.mozdev.org</b>'<br><br></li>
1.68      david     265: </ul>
                    266: 
                    267: 
1.69      david     268: <a name="ch11">
                    269: <p><b>Chapter 11</b>
1.68      david     270: 
1.70      david     271: <ul> 
                    272: <li>On page 314: In Example 11-5 and Example 11-6 '<b class="broken">var linetext =
                    273: document.createTextNode(messageParagraphs[i]);</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">var linetext =
                    274: document.createTextNode(lines[i]);</b>'<br><br>
1.20      david     275: </ul>
                    276: 
                    277: 
                    278: <a name="ch12">
                    279: <p><b>Chapter 12</b>
                    280: 
                    281: <ul>
                    282: 
1.47      david     283: <li>On page 336: In Example 12-6
1.20      david     284: 
1.54      david     285: <xmp class="broken">
1.38      petejc    286:  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
                    287:  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
                    288:    print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
1.47      david     289: </xmp>
                    290: 
1.48      david     291: has been changed to (note the difference in indentation and in using a single quote versus a backtick)
1.47      david     292: 
1.55      david     293: <xmp class="fixed">
1.48      david     294:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
                    295:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
1.38      petejc    296:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
                    297: </xmp>
1.47      david     298: 
                    299: <li>On page 339: A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital
                    300: Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a
                    301: href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>
1.38      petejc    302: </li>
1.47      david     303: 
1.20      david     304: </ul>
                    305: 
                    306: 
                    307: <a name="appa">
                    308: <p><b>Appendix A</b>
                    309: 
                    310: <ul>
1.18      david     311: 
1.54      david     312: <li>On page 365: '<b class="broken">http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml</b>' has been changed to '<b
                    313: class="fixed">http://www.mozilla.org/source.html</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david     314: 
1.1       david     315: </ul>
1.2       david     316: 
1.3       david     317: <br><br>
                    318: 
1.23      petejc    319: <!-- ?php require(NOTES); ? -->
                    320: <?php $post_to_list=NO; $author='reviewers@mozdev.org'; $target_page='corrections'; require(NOTES); ?>

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