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1.1       david       6: <p><b>Corrections</b>
                      7: 
1.21      david       8: <p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of
1.19      david       9: the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors in the text,
1.22      david      10: feel free open a <a href="bugs.html">bug</a> with a report of the problem, post a message in the User Notes 
                     11: section on the chapter pages, or send a message to the <a
1.19      david      12: href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.
1.1       david      13: 
1.56      david      14: <p><b>Note:</b> All errors in the text and examples are shown in <b class="broken">red</b> and all corrections are shown in <b
                     15: class="fixed">green</b>.
1.20      david      16: 
                     17: <a name="preface">
                     18: <p><b>Preface</b>
                     19: 
1.1       david      20: <ul>
1.18      david      21: 
1.51      petejc     22: <li>On page xiv: '<b class="broken">http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/</b>' has been changed
                     23: to '<b class="fixed">http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      24: 
1.20      david      25: </ul>
                     26: 
                     27: 
                     28: <a name="ch1">
                     29: <p><b>Chapter 1</b>
                     30: 
                     31: <ul>
                     32: 
1.53      david      33: <li>On page 7: '<b class="broken">applications web built using XPFE</b>' has been
                     34: changed to '<b class="fixed">applications built using XPFE</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      35: 
1.20      david      36: </ul>
                     37: 
                     38: 
                     39: <a name="ch2">
                     40: <p><b>Chapter 2</b>
                     41: 
                     42: <ul>
                     43: 
1.57      david      44: <li>On page 10: Added a new sentence to the end of the 2nd paragraph of the xFly examples sidebar: '<b class="fixed">An installable version
1.58      david      45: of the complete xFly application can be found at http://xfly.mozdev.org.</b>'<br><br>
1.57      david      46: 
1.53      david      47: <li>On page 12: '<b class="broken">&lt;window
1.18      david      48: xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"  
1.53      david      49: /&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;window
                     50: xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      51: 
1.64      david      52: <li>On page 14: In first code sample from Windows features section, '<b
                     53: class="broken">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b
                     54: class="fixed">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      55: 
1.53      david      56: <li>On page 17: '<b class="broken">selecting File > Open File > from</b>' has been
                     57: changed to '<b class="fixed">selecting File > Open File from</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      58: 
1.53      david      59: <li>On page 20: '<b class="broken">CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function</b>' has been changed
                     60: to '<b class="fixed">CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function</b>'<br><br>
1.19      david      61: 
1.20      david      62: </ul>
                     63: 
                     64: 
                     65: <a name="ch3">
                     66: <p><b>Chapter 3</b>
                     67: 
                     68: <ul>
                     69: 
1.67      david      70: <li>On page 34: '<b class="broken">We've packed a lot information in this chapter and it be a useful reference</b>' has been changed
                     71: to '<b class="fixed">We've packed a lot of information in this chapter and it will be a useful reference</b>'<br><br>
1.66      david      72: 
1.54      david      73: <li>On page 40: '<b class="broken">&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"
                     74: oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;toolbarbutton
                     75: id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      76: 
1.65      david      77: <li>On page 51: '<b class="broken">&lt;decription&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/decription&gt;</b>' has been 
                     78: changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;description&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/description&gt;</b>'<br><br>
                     79: 
1.20      david      80: </ul>
                     81: 
1.26      petejc     82: <a name="ch5">
                     83: <p><b>Chapter 5</b>
                     84: 
                     85: <ul>
1.40      david      86: 
                     87: <li>On page 113: Javascript 1.5 reference link in footnote has been changed from 
1.54      david      88: '<b class="broken">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/js/core/jsref15/contents.html</b>' to
                     89: '<b class="fixed">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/index.html?content=javascript.html</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc     90: </li>
1.40      david      91: 
1.54      david      92: <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">&lt;/script.</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;/script&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc     93: </li>
1.41      david      94: 
1.54      david      95: <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">dump(l+'\n');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">dump(len+'\n');</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc     96: </li>
1.41      david      97: 
1.61      david      98: <li>On page 135: Example 5-11 has been changed to
                     99: <xmp class="fixed">
1.59      petejc    100: <html>
                    101:   <head>
                    102:     <title>Sound Service Play Example</title>
                    103:     <script>  
                    104:       function play() { 
                    105:         netscape.security.PrivilegeManager.enablePrivilege("UniversalXPConnect"); 
                    106:         var sample = Components.classes["@mozilla.org/sound;1"].createInstance(); 
                    107:         sample = sample.QueryInterface(Components.interfaces.nsISound); 
1.62      petejc    108:         const SND_NETWORK_STD_CID = "@mozilla.org/network/standard-url;1";
                    109:         const SND_I_URL           = "nsIURL";
                    110:         const SND_URL             = new  C.Constructor(SND_NETWORK_STD_CID, SND_I_URL);
                    111:         var url                   = new SND_URL();
                    112:         url.spec                  = 'http://jslib.mozdev.org/test.wav';
                    113:         sample.play(url);
1.59      petejc    114:       } 
                    115:     </script>  
                    116:   </head>  
                    117:   <body>  
                    118:     <form name="form">  
                    119:       <input type="button" value="Play Sound" onclick="play();">  
1.63      petejc    120:     </form>  
1.59      petejc    121:   </body>  
                    122: </html>
                    123: </xmp>
1.61      david     124: </li>
                    125: 
                    126: <li>On page 137: '<b class="broken">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1";</b>' has been changed to 
                    127: '<b class="fixed">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1"];</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    128: </li>
1.43      david     129: 
1.54      david     130: <li>On page 140: '<b class="broken">js> load(`chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">js>
                    131: load('chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    132: </li>
1.43      david     133: 
1.26      petejc    134: </ul>
                    135: 
1.24      petejc    136: <a name="ch08">
                    137: <p><b>Chapter 8</b>
                    138: 
                    139: <ul>
1.44      david     140: 
1.54      david     141: <li>On page 211: In 2nd sentence of paragraph '<b class="broken">QueryInterace</b>' has been changed to '<b 
                    142: class="fixed">QueryInterface</b>'<br><br>
1.44      david     143: 
1.54      david     144: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 '<b class="broken">mName: "a default value"</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">mName: "a default 
                    145: value",</b>'<br><br>
1.44      david     146: 
1.47      david     147: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4
1.45      david     148: 
1.54      david     149:             <xmp class="broken">
1.33      petejc    150:               this.myCID,
                    151:               "My JS Component",
                    152:               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
                    153:               location, true, true,
                    154:               type);
                    155:             </xmp>            
1.45      david     156: 
1.47      david     157: has been changed to
1.45      david     158: 
1.54      david     159:             <xmp class="fixed">            
1.33      petejc    160:               compMgr.registerComponentWithType(
                    161:               this.myCID,
                    162:               "My JS Component",
                    163:               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
                    164:               location, true, true,
                    165:               type);
                    166:             </xmp>            
1.45      david     167: 
1.68    ! david     168: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">dump(" ***** Registering: Simple JS component!
        !           169: ****\n");</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
1.45      david     170: 
1.54      david     171: <li>On page 223: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">if (outer != null)</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
1.45      david     172: 
                    173: <li>On page 239: Example 8-15 has been changed to <br/>
1.25      petejc    174: 
1.54      david     175: <xmp class="fixed">
1.24      petejc    176: DEPTH         = ../../..
                    177: topsrcdir     = ../../..
                    178: srcdir        = .
                    179: VPATH         = .
                    180: 
                    181: include $(DEPTH)/config/autoconf.mk
                    182: 
                    183: MODULE        = xpcom
                    184: XPIDL_MODULE  = simple
                    185: LIBRARY_NAME  = simple
                    186: IS_COMPONENT  = 1
                    187: MODULE_NAME   = nsSimpleModule
                    188: REQUIRES      = string \
                    189:                 xpcom \
                    190:                 $(NULL)
                    191: 
                    192: 
                    193: CPPSRCS   =              \
                    194:     nsSimple.cpp         \
                    195:     nsSimpleModule.cpp   \
                    196:     $(NULL)
                    197: 
                    198: XPIDLSRCS = nsISimple.idl
                    199: 
                    200: include $(topsrcdir)/config/config.mk
                    201: 
                    202: LIBS    +=        \
                    203:     $(XPCOM_LIBS) \
                    204:     $(NSPR_LIBS)  \
                    205:     $(NULL)
                    206: 
                    207: include $(topsrcdir)/config/rules.mk
                    208: 
                    209: EXTRA_DSO_LDOPTS += $(MOZ_COMPONENT_LIBS)
                    210: 
                    211: install:: $(TARGETS)
1.25      petejc    212: </xmp>
1.24      petejc    213: 
                    214: </ul>
                    215: 
1.20      david     216: 
                    217: <a name="ch10">
                    218: <p><b>Chapter 10</b>
                    219: 
                    220: <ul>
1.54      david     221: <li>On page 297: '<b class="broken">http://www.jslib.mozdev.org</b>' has been changed
                    222: to '<b class="fixed">http://jslib.mozdev.org</b>'<br><br></li>
1.68    ! david     223: </ul>
        !           224: 
        !           225: 
        !           226: <a name="ch10">
        !           227: <p><b>Chapter 10</b>
        !           228: 
        !           229: <ul>
        !           230: <li>On page 314: In Example 11-5 '<b class="broken">var linetext = document.createTextNode(messageParagraphs[i]);</b>' 
        !           231: has been changed to '<b class="fixed">var linetext = document.createTextNode(lines[i]);</b>'<br><br>
        !           232: 
        !           233: <li>On page 314: In Example 11-6 '<b class="broken">var linetext = document.createTextNode(messageParagraphs[i]);</b>' 
        !           234: has been changed to '<b class="fixed">var linetext = document.createTextNode(lines[i]);</b>'<br><br>
1.20      david     235: </ul>
                    236: 
                    237: 
                    238: <a name="ch12">
                    239: <p><b>Chapter 12</b>
                    240: 
                    241: <ul>
                    242: 
1.47      david     243: <li>On page 336: In Example 12-6
1.20      david     244: 
1.54      david     245: <xmp class="broken">
1.38      petejc    246:  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
                    247:  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
                    248:    print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
1.47      david     249: </xmp>
                    250: 
1.48      david     251: has been changed to (note the difference in indentation and in using a single quote versus a backtick)
1.47      david     252: 
1.55      david     253: <xmp class="fixed">
1.48      david     254:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
                    255:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
1.38      petejc    256:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
                    257: </xmp>
1.47      david     258: 
                    259: <li>On page 339: A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital
                    260: Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a
                    261: href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>
1.38      petejc    262: </li>
1.47      david     263: 
1.20      david     264: </ul>
                    265: 
                    266: 
                    267: <a name="appa">
                    268: <p><b>Appendix A</b>
                    269: 
                    270: <ul>
1.18      david     271: 
1.54      david     272: <li>On page 365: '<b class="broken">http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml</b>' has been changed to '<b
                    273: class="fixed">http://www.mozilla.org/source.html</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david     274: 
1.1       david     275: </ul>
1.2       david     276: 
1.3       david     277: <br><br>
                    278: 
1.23      petejc    279: <!-- ?php require(NOTES); ? -->
                    280: <?php $post_to_list=NO; $author='reviewers@mozdev.org'; $target_page='corrections'; require(NOTES); ?>

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