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1.1       david       6: <p><b>Corrections</b>
                      7: 
1.21      david       8: <p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of
1.19      david       9: the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors in the text,
1.22      david      10: feel free open a <a href="bugs.html">bug</a> with a report of the problem, post a message in the User Notes 
                     11: section on the chapter pages, or send a message to the <a
1.19      david      12: href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.
1.1       david      13: 
1.56      david      14: <p><b>Note:</b> All errors in the text and examples are shown in <b class="broken">red</b> and all corrections are shown in <b
                     15: class="fixed">green</b>.
1.20      david      16: 
                     17: <a name="preface">
                     18: <p><b>Preface</b>
                     19: 
1.1       david      20: <ul>
1.18      david      21: 
1.51      petejc     22: <li>On page xiv: '<b class="broken">http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/</b>' has been changed
                     23: to '<b class="fixed">http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      24: 
1.20      david      25: </ul>
                     26: 
                     27: 
                     28: <a name="ch1">
                     29: <p><b>Chapter 1</b>
                     30: 
                     31: <ul>
                     32: 
1.53      david      33: <li>On page 7: '<b class="broken">applications web built using XPFE</b>' has been
                     34: changed to '<b class="fixed">applications built using XPFE</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      35: 
1.20      david      36: </ul>
                     37: 
                     38: 
                     39: <a name="ch2">
                     40: <p><b>Chapter 2</b>
                     41: 
                     42: <ul>
                     43: 
1.57      david      44: <li>On page 10: Added a new sentence to the end of the 2nd paragraph of the xFly examples sidebar: '<b class="fixed">An installable version
1.58      david      45: of the complete xFly application can be found at http://xfly.mozdev.org.</b>'<br><br>
1.57      david      46: 
1.53      david      47: <li>On page 12: '<b class="broken">&lt;window
1.18      david      48: xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"  
1.53      david      49: /&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;window
                     50: xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      51: 
1.64      david      52: <li>On page 14: In first code sample from Windows features section, '<b
                     53: class="broken">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b
                     54: class="fixed">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      55: 
1.53      david      56: <li>On page 17: '<b class="broken">selecting File > Open File > from</b>' has been
                     57: changed to '<b class="fixed">selecting File > Open File from</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      58: 
1.53      david      59: <li>On page 20: '<b class="broken">CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function</b>' has been changed
                     60: to '<b class="fixed">CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function</b>'<br><br>
1.19      david      61: 
1.20      david      62: </ul>
                     63: 
                     64: 
                     65: <a name="ch3">
                     66: <p><b>Chapter 3</b>
                     67: 
                     68: <ul>
                     69: 
1.54      david      70: <li>On page 40: '<b class="broken">&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"
                     71: oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;toolbarbutton
                     72: id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david      73: 
1.65    ! david      74: <li>On page 51: '<b class="broken">&lt;decription&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/decription&gt;</b>' has been 
        !            75: changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;description&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/description&gt;</b>'<br><br>
        !            76: 
1.20      david      77: </ul>
                     78: 
1.26      petejc     79: <a name="ch5">
                     80: <p><b>Chapter 5</b>
                     81: 
                     82: <ul>
1.40      david      83: 
                     84: <li>On page 113: Javascript 1.5 reference link in footnote has been changed from 
1.54      david      85: '<b class="broken">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/js/core/jsref15/contents.html</b>' to
                     86: '<b class="fixed">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/index.html?content=javascript.html</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc     87: </li>
1.40      david      88: 
1.54      david      89: <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">&lt;/script.</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;/script&gt;</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc     90: </li>
1.41      david      91: 
1.54      david      92: <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">dump(l+'\n');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">dump(len+'\n');</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc     93: </li>
1.41      david      94: 
1.61      david      95: <li>On page 135: Example 5-11 has been changed to
                     96: <xmp class="fixed">
1.59      petejc     97: <html>
                     98:   <head>
                     99:     <title>Sound Service Play Example</title>
                    100:     <script>  
                    101:       function play() { 
                    102:         netscape.security.PrivilegeManager.enablePrivilege("UniversalXPConnect"); 
                    103:         var sample = Components.classes["@mozilla.org/sound;1"].createInstance(); 
                    104:         sample = sample.QueryInterface(Components.interfaces.nsISound); 
1.62      petejc    105:         const SND_NETWORK_STD_CID = "@mozilla.org/network/standard-url;1";
                    106:         const SND_I_URL           = "nsIURL";
                    107:         const SND_URL             = new  C.Constructor(SND_NETWORK_STD_CID, SND_I_URL);
                    108:         var url                   = new SND_URL();
                    109:         url.spec                  = 'http://jslib.mozdev.org/test.wav';
                    110:         sample.play(url);
1.59      petejc    111:       } 
                    112:     </script>  
                    113:   </head>  
                    114:   <body>  
                    115:     <form name="form">  
                    116:       <input type="button" value="Play Sound" onclick="play();">  
1.63      petejc    117:     </form>  
1.59      petejc    118:   </body>  
                    119: </html>
                    120: </xmp>
1.61      david     121: </li>
                    122: 
                    123: <li>On page 137: '<b class="broken">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1";</b>' has been changed to 
                    124: '<b class="fixed">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1"];</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    125: </li>
1.43      david     126: 
1.54      david     127: <li>On page 140: '<b class="broken">js> load(`chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">js>
                    128: load('chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>'<br><br>
1.59      petejc    129: </li>
1.43      david     130: 
1.26      petejc    131: </ul>
                    132: 
1.24      petejc    133: <a name="ch08">
                    134: <p><b>Chapter 8</b>
                    135: 
                    136: <ul>
1.44      david     137: 
1.54      david     138: <li>On page 211: In 2nd sentence of paragraph '<b class="broken">QueryInterace</b>' has been changed to '<b 
                    139: class="fixed">QueryInterface</b>'<br><br>
1.44      david     140: 
1.54      david     141: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 '<b class="broken">mName: "a default value"</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">mName: "a default 
                    142: value",</b>'<br><br>
1.44      david     143: 
1.47      david     144: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4
1.45      david     145: 
1.54      david     146:             <xmp class="broken">
1.33      petejc    147:               this.myCID,
                    148:               "My JS Component",
                    149:               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
                    150:               location, true, true,
                    151:               type);
                    152:             </xmp>            
1.45      david     153: 
1.47      david     154: has been changed to
1.45      david     155: 
1.54      david     156:             <xmp class="fixed">            
1.33      petejc    157:               compMgr.registerComponentWithType(
                    158:               this.myCID,
                    159:               "My JS Component",
                    160:               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
                    161:               location, true, true,
                    162:               type);
                    163:             </xmp>            
1.45      david     164: 
1.54      david     165: <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">dump(" ***** Registering: Simple JS component! ****\n");</b>' lines
                    166: has been removed<br><br>
1.45      david     167: 
1.54      david     168: <li>On page 223: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">if (outer != null)</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
1.45      david     169: 
                    170: <li>On page 239: Example 8-15 has been changed to <br/>
1.25      petejc    171: 
1.54      david     172: <xmp class="fixed">
1.24      petejc    173: DEPTH         = ../../..
                    174: topsrcdir     = ../../..
                    175: srcdir        = .
                    176: VPATH         = .
                    177: 
                    178: include $(DEPTH)/config/autoconf.mk
                    179: 
                    180: MODULE        = xpcom
                    181: XPIDL_MODULE  = simple
                    182: LIBRARY_NAME  = simple
                    183: IS_COMPONENT  = 1
                    184: MODULE_NAME   = nsSimpleModule
                    185: REQUIRES      = string \
                    186:                 xpcom \
                    187:                 $(NULL)
                    188: 
                    189: 
                    190: CPPSRCS   =              \
                    191:     nsSimple.cpp         \
                    192:     nsSimpleModule.cpp   \
                    193:     $(NULL)
                    194: 
                    195: XPIDLSRCS = nsISimple.idl
                    196: 
                    197: include $(topsrcdir)/config/config.mk
                    198: 
                    199: LIBS    +=        \
                    200:     $(XPCOM_LIBS) \
                    201:     $(NSPR_LIBS)  \
                    202:     $(NULL)
                    203: 
                    204: include $(topsrcdir)/config/rules.mk
                    205: 
                    206: EXTRA_DSO_LDOPTS += $(MOZ_COMPONENT_LIBS)
                    207: 
                    208: install:: $(TARGETS)
1.25      petejc    209: </xmp>
1.24      petejc    210: 
                    211: </ul>
                    212: 
1.20      david     213: 
                    214: <a name="ch10">
                    215: <p><b>Chapter 10</b>
                    216: 
                    217: <ul>
1.54      david     218: <li>On page 297: '<b class="broken">http://www.jslib.mozdev.org</b>' has been changed
                    219: to '<b class="fixed">http://jslib.mozdev.org</b>'<br><br></li>
1.20      david     220: </ul>
                    221: 
                    222: 
                    223: <a name="ch12">
                    224: <p><b>Chapter 12</b>
                    225: 
                    226: <ul>
                    227: 
1.47      david     228: <li>On page 336: In Example 12-6
1.20      david     229: 
1.54      david     230: <xmp class="broken">
1.38      petejc    231:  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
                    232:  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
                    233:    print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
1.47      david     234: </xmp>
                    235: 
1.48      david     236: has been changed to (note the difference in indentation and in using a single quote versus a backtick)
1.47      david     237: 
1.55      david     238: <xmp class="fixed">
1.48      david     239:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
                    240:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
1.38      petejc    241:    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
                    242: </xmp>
1.47      david     243: 
                    244: <li>On page 339: A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital
                    245: Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a
                    246: href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>
1.38      petejc    247: </li>
1.47      david     248: 
1.20      david     249: </ul>
                    250: 
                    251: 
                    252: <a name="appa">
                    253: <p><b>Appendix A</b>
                    254: 
                    255: <ul>
1.18      david     256: 
1.54      david     257: <li>On page 365: '<b class="broken">http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml</b>' has been changed to '<b
                    258: class="fixed">http://www.mozilla.org/source.html</b>'<br><br>
1.18      david     259: 
1.1       david     260: </ul>
1.2       david     261: 
1.3       david     262: <br><br>
                    263: 
1.23      petejc    264: <!-- ?php require(NOTES); ? -->
                    265: <?php $post_to_list=NO; $author='reviewers@mozdev.org'; $target_page='corrections'; require(NOTES); ?>

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