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 <body><p><b>Corrections</b>
 
 <p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of
 the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors in the text,
 feel free open a <a href="bugs.html">bug</a> with a report of the problem, post a message in the User Notes 
 section on the chapter pages, or send a message to the <a
 href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.
   
<p>This page contains a list of corrections made to the original text of the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors<p><b>Note:</b> All errors in the text and examples are shown in <b class="broken">red</b> and all corrections are shown in <b
in the text, feel free to post a note below or send a message to the <a href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.class="fixed">green</b>.
 
 <a name="preface"></a>
 <p><b>Preface</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page ix: '<b class="broken">other browsers such as Galeon and Chimera</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">other browsers 
 such as Galeon and Camino</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page xiv: '<b class="broken">http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/</b>' has been changed
 to '<b class="fixed">http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page xvii: '<b class="broken">David Hyatt and Mike Pinkerton for the Chimera browser</b>' has been changed to '<b
 class="fixed">David Hyatt and Mike Pinkerton for the Camino browser</b>'<br><br>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch1"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 1</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 2: In sidebar '<b class="broken">like Chimera (an ultra-fast browser that works only on Mac OS X)</b>' has been changed to 
 '<b class="fixed">like Camino (an ultra-fast browser that works only on Mac OS X)</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 7: In sidebar '<b class="broken">Another project, call m/b (short for mozilla/browser), addresses shortcomings</b>' has
 been changed to '<b class="fixed">The Phoenix project (http://www.mozilla.org/projects/phoenix/) also addresses
 shortcomings</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 7: In sidebar '<b class="broken">Some examples include Chimera (http://chimera.mozdev.org)</b>' has been changed to '<b 
 class="fixed">Some examples include Camino (http://www.mozilla.org/projects/camino/)</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 7: '<b class="broken">applications web built using XPFE</b>' has been
 changed to '<b class="fixed">applications built using XPFE</b>'<br><br>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch2"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 2</b>
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Chapter 10 (p 297) 'www.jslib.mozdev.org' has been changed to 'jslib.mozdev.org'<br><br><li>On page 10: Added a new sentence to the end of the 2nd paragraph of the xFly examples sidebar: '<b class="fixed">An installable version
 of the complete xFly application can be found at http://xfly.mozdev.org.</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 12: '<b class="broken">&lt;window
 xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"  
 /&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;window
 xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 14: In first code sample from Windows features section, '<b
 class="broken">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b
 class="fixed">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 17: '<b class="broken">selecting File > Open File > from</b>' has been
 changed to '<b class="fixed">selecting File > Open File from</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 20: '<b class="broken">CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function</b>' has been changed
 to '<b class="fixed">CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function</b>'<br><br>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch3"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 3</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 34: '<b class="broken">We've packed a lot information in this chapter and it be a useful reference</b>' has been changed
 to '<b class="fixed">We've packed a lot of information in this chapter and it will be a useful reference</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 35: '<b class="broken">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[i];</b>' has been changed to '<b 
 class="fixed">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[I];</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 40: '<b class="broken">&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"
 oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;toolbarbutton
 id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 51: '<b class="broken">&lt;decription&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/decription&gt;</b>' has been 
 changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;description&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/description&gt;</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On pages 58 and 59: Example 3-15 has been changed to (note the addition of spaces to seperate values)
 
 <xmp class="fixed">
 <?xml version="1.0"?>
 <window id="hello-goodbye"
     title="Hello Goodbye"
     xmlns:html="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
     xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"
     style="min-width:100px;min-height:100px;background-color:white;">
   <broadcasterset id="broadcasterset">
     <broadcaster id="cmd_hello" oncommand="alert('Hello There!');"/>
   </broadcasterset>
   <keyset id="keyset">
     <key id="key_h" key="H" observes="cmd_hello" modifiers="accel,shift" />
     <key id="key_g" key="G" command="cmd_goodbye" modifiers="accel,shift" />
   </keyset>
   <commandset id="commandset">
     <command id="cmd_goodbye" oncommand="alert('Goodbye!');" />
   </commandset>
   <spacer flex="1"/>
   <label value="hello/goodbye"/>
   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+h"/>
   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+g"/>
   <spacer flex="1"/>
 </window>
 </xmp>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch4"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 4</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 88: '<b class="broken">these are selectors are identical</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">these selectors are 
 identical</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 109: '<b class="broken">The chome URL that the -moz-binding property points to</b>' has been changed to '<b
 class="fixed">The chrome URL that the -moz-binding property points to</b>'<br><br>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch5"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 5</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 113: Javascript 1.5 reference link in footnote has been changed from 
 '<b class="broken">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/js/core/jsref15/contents.html</b>' to
 '<b class="fixed">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/index.html?content=javascript.html</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">&lt;/script.</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;/script&gt;</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">dump(l+'\n');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">dump(len+'\n');</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 135: Example 5-11 has been changed to
 <xmp class="fixed">
 
   <head>
     <title>Sound Service Play Example</title>
     <script>  
       function play() { 
         netscape.security.PrivilegeManager.enablePrivilege("UniversalXPConnect"); 
         var sample = Components.classes["@mozilla.org/sound;1"].createInstance(); 
         sample = sample.QueryInterface(Components.interfaces.nsISound); 
         const SND_NETWORK_STD_CID = "@mozilla.org/network/standard-url;1";
         const SND_I_URL           = "nsIURL";
         const SND_URL             = new  C.Constructor(SND_NETWORK_STD_CID, SND_I_URL);
         var url                   = new SND_URL();
         url.spec                  = 'http://jslib.mozdev.org/test.wav';
         sample.play(url);
       } 
     </script>  
   </head>  
     
     <form name="form">  
       <input type="button" value="Play Sound" onclick="play();">  
     </form>  
 
 </xmp>
 
 <li>On page 137: '<b class="broken">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1";</b>' 
   has been changed to 
 '<b class="fixed">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1"];</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 140: '<b class="broken">js> load(`chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">js>
 load('chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
   </ul>
 
 <a name="ch08"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 8</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 211: In 2nd sentence of paragraph '<b class="broken">QueryInterace</b>' has been changed to '<b 
 class="fixed">QueryInterface</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 '<b class="broken">mName: "a default value"</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">mName: "a default 
 value",</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4
 
             <xmp class="broken">
               this.myCID,
               "My JS Component",
               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
               location, true, true,
               type);
             </xmp>            
   
<li>In Chapter 1 (p 7) 'applications web built using XPFE' has been changed to 'applications built using XPFE'<br><br>has been changed to
   
<li>In Chapter 2 (p 17) 'selecting File > Open File > from' has been changed to 'selecting File > Open File from'<br><br>            <xmp class="fixed">            
               compMgr.registerComponentWithType(
               this.myCID,
               "My JS Component",
               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
               location, true, true,
               type);
             </xmp>            
   
<li>Appendix A (p 365) 'http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml' has been changed to 'http://www.mozilla.org/source.html'<br><br><li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">dump(" ***** Registering: Simple JS component!
 ****\n");</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 223: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">if (outer != null)</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 239: Example 8-15 has been changed to <br/>
 
 <xmp class="fixed">
 DEPTH         = ../../..
 topsrcdir     = ../../..
 srcdir        = .
 VPATH         = .
 
 include $(DEPTH)/config/autoconf.mk
 
 MODULE        = xpcom
 XPIDL_MODULE  = simple
 LIBRARY_NAME  = simple
 IS_COMPONENT  = 1
 MODULE_NAME   = nsSimpleModule
 REQUIRES      = string \
                 xpcom \
                 $(NULL)
 
 
 CPPSRCS   =              \
     nsSimple.cpp         \
     nsSimpleModule.cpp   \
     $(NULL)
 
 XPIDLSRCS = nsISimple.idl
 
 include $(topsrcdir)/config/config.mk
 
 LIBS    +=        \
     $(XPCOM_LIBS) \
     $(NSPR_LIBS)  \
     $(NULL)
 
 include $(topsrcdir)/config/rules.mk
 
 EXTRA_DSO_LDOPTS += $(MOZ_COMPONENT_LIBS)
 
 install:: $(TARGETS)
 </xmp>
 
 </ul>
 
 <a name="ch9"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 9</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 257: In Example 9-7
 
 <xmp class="broken">
         <triple subject="?listitem"
                 predicate=" http://xfly.mozdev.org/fly-rdf#location"
                 object="?location"/>
 </xmp>
 
 has been changed to
 
 <xmp class="fixed">
         <triple subject="?listitem"
                 predicate="fly-location#location"
                 object="?location"/>
 </xmp>
 
 </ul>
 
 <a name="ch10"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 10</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 280: In Table 10-3 '<b class="broken">Mostly used for retrieving, datasources, resources, and literals.</b>' has been
 changed to '<b class="fixed">Mostly used for retrieving datasources, resources, and literals.</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 297: '<b class="broken">http://www.jslib.mozdev.org</b>' has been changed to '<b
 class="fixed">http://jslib.mozdev.org</b>'<br><br>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch11"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 11</b>
 
 <ul> 
 <li>On page 314: In Example 11-5 and Example 11-6 '<b class="broken">var linetext =
 document.createTextNode(messageParagraphs[i]);</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">var linetext =
 document.createTextNode(lines[i]);</b>'<br><br>
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch12"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 12</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 336: In Example 12-6
 
 <xmp class="broken">
  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
    print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
 </xmp>
 
 has been changed to (note the difference in indentation and in using a single quote versus a backtick)
 
 <xmp class="fixed">
    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
 </xmp>
   
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   </ul>
   
   
   <a name="appa"></a>
   <p><b>Appendix A</b>
   
   <ul>
   
   <li>On page 365: '<b class="broken">http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml</b>' has been changed to '<b
   class="fixed">http://www.mozilla.org/source.html</b>'<br><br>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
 <br><br>  
   
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 <p><b>Index</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 437: '<b class="broken">Chimera, 2</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">Camino, 2</b>'<br><br>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <br><br>
   
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