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 <p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of
 the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors in the text,
 feel free open a <a href="bugs.html">bug</a> with a report of the problem, post a message in the User Notes 
 section on the chapter pages, or send a message to the <a
 href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.
   
<p>This page contains a list of corrections made to the original text of the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors<p><b>Note:</b> All errors in the text and examples are shown in <b class="broken">red</b> and all corrections are shown in <b
in the text, feel free to post a note below or send a message to the <a href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.class="fixed">green</b>.
 
 <a name="preface"></a>
 <p><b>Preface</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page xiv: '<b class="broken">http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/</b>' has been changed
 to '<b class="fixed">http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/</b>'<br><br>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch1"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 1</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 7: In sidebar '<b class="broken">Another project, call m/b (short for mozilla/browser), addresses shortcomings</b>' has
 been changed to '<b class="fixed">The Phoenix project (http://www.mozilla.org/projects/phoenix/) also addresses
 shortcomings</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 7: In sidebar the Chimera URL '<b class="broken">http://chimera.mozdev.org</b>' has been changed to '<b
 class="fixed">http://www.mozilla.org/projects/chimera/</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 7: '<b class="broken">applications web built using XPFE</b>' has been
 changed to '<b class="fixed">applications built using XPFE</b>'<br><br>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch2"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 2</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 10: Added a new sentence to the end of the 2nd paragraph of the xFly examples sidebar: '<b class="fixed">An installable version
 of the complete xFly application can be found at http://xfly.mozdev.org.</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 12: '<b class="broken">&lt;window
 xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"  
 /&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;window
 xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 14: In first code sample from Windows features section, '<b
 class="broken">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b
 class="fixed">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 17: '<b class="broken">selecting File > Open File > from</b>' has been
 changed to '<b class="fixed">selecting File > Open File from</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 20: '<b class="broken">CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function</b>' has been changed
 to '<b class="fixed">CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function</b>'<br><br>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch3"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 3</b>
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Chapter 10 (p 297) 'www.jslib.mozdev.org' has been changed to 'jslib.mozdev.org'<br><br><li>On page 34: '<b class="broken">We've packed a lot information in this chapter and it be a useful reference</b>' has been changed
 to '<b class="fixed">We've packed a lot of information in this chapter and it will be a useful reference</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 35: '<b class="broken">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[i];</b>' has been changed to '<b 
 class="fixed">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[I];</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 40: '<b class="broken">&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"
 oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;toolbarbutton
 id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 51: '<b class="broken">&lt;decription&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/decription&gt;</b>' has been 
 changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;description&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/description&gt;</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On pages 58 and 59: Example 3-15 has been changed to (note the addition of spaces to seperate values)
 
 <xmp class="fixed">
 <?xml version="1.0"?>
 <window id="hello-goodbye"
     title="Hello Goodbye"
     xmlns:html="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
     xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"
     style="min-width:100px;min-height:100px;background-color:white;">
   <broadcasterset id="broadcasterset">
     <broadcaster id="cmd_hello" oncommand="alert('Hello There!');"/>
   </broadcasterset>
   <keyset id="keyset">
     <key id="key_h" key="H" observes="cmd_hello" modifiers="accel,shift" />
     <key id="key_g" key="G" command="cmd_goodbye" modifiers="accel,shift" />
   </keyset>
   <commandset id="commandset">
     <command id="cmd_goodbye" oncommand="alert('Goodbye!');" />
   </commandset>
   <spacer flex="1"/>
   <label value="hello/goodbye"/>
   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+h"/>
   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+g"/>
   <spacer flex="1"/>
 </window>
 </xmp>
 
 </ul>
   
 <li>In Chapter 1 (p 7) 'applications web built using XPFE' has been changed to 'applications built using XPFE'<br><br>  
   
<li>In Chapter 2 (p 17) 'selecting File > Open File > from' has been changed to 'selecting File > Open File from'<br><br><a name="ch4"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 4</b>
   
<li>Appendix A (p 365) 'http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml' has been changed to 'http://www.mozilla.org/source.html'<br><br><ul>
   
<!--<li>On page 88: '<b class="broken">these are selectors are identical</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">these selectors are 
 I also notice that the url - http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/ - does notidentical</b>'<br><br>
> resolve despite being mentioned on p.xiv in preface. Perhaps you should 
> get a redirect up there to /catalog/mozilla/. 
--> 
   
   <li>On page 109: '<b class="broken">The chome URL that the -moz-binding property points to</b>' has been changed to '<b
   class="fixed">The chrome URL that the -moz-binding property points to</b>'<br><br>
   
   </ul>
   
   
   <a name="ch5"></a>
   <p><b>Chapter 5</b>
   
   <ul>
   
   <li>On page 113: Javascript 1.5 reference link in footnote has been changed from 
   '<b class="broken">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/js/core/jsref15/contents.html</b>' to
   '<b class="fixed">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/index.html?content=javascript.html</b>'<br><br>
   </li>
   
   <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">&lt;/script.</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;/script&gt;</b>'<br><br>
   </li>
   
   <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">dump(l+'\n');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">dump(len+'\n');</b>'<br><br>
   </li>
   
   <li>On page 135: Example 5-11 has been changed to
   <xmp class="fixed">
   
     <head>
       <title>Sound Service Play Example</title>
       <script>  
         function play() { 
           netscape.security.PrivilegeManager.enablePrivilege("UniversalXPConnect"); 
           var sample = Components.classes["@mozilla.org/sound;1"].createInstance(); 
           sample = sample.QueryInterface(Components.interfaces.nsISound); 
           const SND_NETWORK_STD_CID = "@mozilla.org/network/standard-url;1";
           const SND_I_URL           = "nsIURL";
           const SND_URL             = new  C.Constructor(SND_NETWORK_STD_CID, SND_I_URL);
           var url                   = new SND_URL();
           url.spec                  = 'http://jslib.mozdev.org/test.wav';
           sample.play(url);
         } 
       </script>  
     </head>  
       
       <form name="form">  
         <input type="button" value="Play Sound" onclick="play();">  
       </form>  
   
   </xmp>
   
   <li>On page 137: '<b class="broken">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1";</b>' 
     has been changed to 
   '<b class="fixed">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1"];</b>'<br><br>
   </li>
   
   <li>On page 140: '<b class="broken">js> load(`chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">js>
   load('chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>'<br><br>
   </li>
   
     </ul>
   
   <a name="ch08"></a>
   <p><b>Chapter 8</b>
   
   <ul>
   
   <li>On page 211: In 2nd sentence of paragraph '<b class="broken">QueryInterace</b>' has been changed to '<b 
   class="fixed">QueryInterface</b>'<br><br>
   
   <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 '<b class="broken">mName: "a default value"</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">mName: "a default 
   value",</b>'<br><br>
   
   <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4
   
               <xmp class="broken">
                 this.myCID,
                 "My JS Component",
                 this.myProgID, fileSpec,
                 location, true, true,
                 type);
               </xmp>            
   
   has been changed to
   
               <xmp class="fixed">            
                 compMgr.registerComponentWithType(
                 this.myCID,
                 "My JS Component",
                 this.myProgID, fileSpec,
                 location, true, true,
                 type);
               </xmp>            
   
   <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">dump(" ***** Registering: Simple JS component!
   ****\n");</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
   
   <li>On page 223: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">if (outer != null)</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
   
   <li>On page 239: Example 8-15 has been changed to <br/>
   
   <xmp class="fixed">
   DEPTH         = ../../..
   topsrcdir     = ../../..
   srcdir        = .
   VPATH         = .
   
   include $(DEPTH)/config/autoconf.mk
   
   MODULE        = xpcom
   XPIDL_MODULE  = simple
   LIBRARY_NAME  = simple
   IS_COMPONENT  = 1
   MODULE_NAME   = nsSimpleModule
   REQUIRES      = string \
                   xpcom \
                   $(NULL)
   
   
   CPPSRCS   =              \
       nsSimple.cpp         \
       nsSimpleModule.cpp   \
       $(NULL)
   
   XPIDLSRCS = nsISimple.idl
   
   include $(topsrcdir)/config/config.mk
   
   LIBS    +=        \
       $(XPCOM_LIBS) \
       $(NSPR_LIBS)  \
       $(NULL)
   
   include $(topsrcdir)/config/rules.mk
   
   EXTRA_DSO_LDOPTS += $(MOZ_COMPONENT_LIBS)
   
   install:: $(TARGETS)
   </xmp>
   
   </ul>
   
   <a name="ch9"></a>
   <p><b>Chapter 9</b>
   
   <ul>
     <li>On page 257: In Example 9-7 <br>
       '<b><font color="#FF0000">&lt;triple subject=&quot;?listitem&quot;<br>
       predicate=&quot; http://xfly.mozdev.org/fly-rdf#location&quot;<br>
       object=&quot;?location&quot;/&gt;</font></b>' <br>
       has been changed to<br>
       '<b><font color="#009900">&lt;triple subject=&quot;?listitem&quot;<br>
       predicate=&quot;fly-location#location&quot;<br>
       object=&quot;?location&quot;/&gt;</font></b>'</li>
   </ul>
   
   <a name="ch10"></a>
   <p><b>Chapter 10</b>
   
   <ul>
     <li>On page 280: In Table 10-3 '<font color="#FF0000">Mostly used for retrieving, 
       datasources,<br>
       resources, and literals</font>.' has been changed to '<font color="#009900">Mostly 
       used for retrieving datasources,<br>
       resources, and literals</font>.'.<br>
       <br>
     </li>
     <li>On page 297: '<b class="broken">http://www.jslib.mozdev.org</b>' has been 
       changed to '<b class="fixed">http://jslib.mozdev.org</b>'<br>
       <br>
     </li>
   </ul>
   
   
   <a name="ch11"></a>
   <p><b>Chapter 11</b>
   
   <ul> 
   <li>On page 314: In Example 11-5 and Example 11-6 '<b class="broken">var linetext =
   document.createTextNode(messageParagraphs[i]);</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">var linetext =
   document.createTextNode(lines[i]);</b>'<br><br>
   </ul>
   
   
   <a name="ch12"></a>
   <p><b>Chapter 12</b>
   
   <ul>
   
   <li>On page 336: In Example 12-6
   
   <xmp class="broken">
    print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
    print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
      print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
   </xmp>
   
   has been changed to (note the difference in indentation and in using a single quote versus a backtick)
   
   <xmp class="fixed">
      print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
      print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
      print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
   </xmp>
   
   <li>On page 339: A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital
   Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a
   href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>
   </li>
   
   </ul>
   
   
   <a name="appa"></a>
   <p><b>Appendix A</b>
   
   <ul>
   
   <li>On page 365: '<b class="broken">http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml</b>' has been changed to '<b
   class="fixed">http://www.mozilla.org/source.html</b>'<br><br>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
 <br><br>  <br><br>
   
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