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 <p><b>Corrections</b>  <p><b>Corrections</b>
   
 <p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of  <p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of
 the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors in the text,  the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors in the text,
feel free to post a note below or send a message to the <afeel free open a <a href="bugs.html">bug</a> with a report of the problem, post a message in the User Notes 
 section on the chapter pages, or send a message to the <a
 href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.  href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.
   
   <p><b>Note:</b> All errors in the text and examples are shown in <b class="broken">red</b> and all corrections are shown in <b
   class="fixed">green</b>.
   
 <a name="preface">  <a name="preface">
 <p><b>Preface</b>  <p><b>Preface</b>
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Preface (p xiv) 'http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/' has been changed<li>On page xiv: '<b class="broken">http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/</b>' has been changed
to 'http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/'<br><br>to '<b class="fixed">http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/</b>'<br><br>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
Line 22  to 'http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozil Line 30  to 'http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozil
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Chapter 1 (p 7) 'applications web built using XPFE' has been<li>On page 7: '<b class="broken">applications web built using XPFE</b>' has been
changed to 'applications built using XPFE'<br><br>changed to '<b class="fixed">applications built using XPFE</b>'<br><br>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
Line 33  changed to 'applications built using XPF Line 41  changed to 'applications built using XPF
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Chapter 2 (p 12) '&lt;window<li>On page 10: Added a new sentence to the end of the 2nd paragraph of the xFly examples sidebar: '<b class="fixed">An installable version
 of the complete xFly application can be found at http://xfly.mozdev.org.</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 12: '<b class="broken">&lt;window
 xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"    xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"  
/&gt;' has been changed to '&lt;window/&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;window
xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;'<br><br>xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>'<br><br>
   
<li>In Chapter 2 (p 14) Removed an extra '>' from example code<br><br><li>On page 14: In first code sample from Windows features section, '<b
 class="broken">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b
 class="fixed">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"</b>'<br><br>
   
<li>In Chapter 2 (p 17) 'selecting File > Open File > from' has been<li>On page 17: '<b class="broken">selecting File > Open File > from</b>' has been
changed to 'selecting File > Open File from'<br><br>changed to '<b class="fixed">selecting File > Open File from</b>'<br><br>
   
<li>In Chapter 2 (p 20) 'CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function' has been changed<li>On page 20: '<b class="broken">CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function</b>' has been changed
to 'CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function'<br><br>to '<b class="fixed">CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function</b>'<br><br>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
Line 54  to 'CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function'<br Line 67  to 'CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function'<br
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Chapter 3 (p 40) '&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"<li>On page 34: '<b class="broken">We've packed a lot information in this chapter and it be a useful reference</b>' has been changed
oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt' has been changed to '&lt;toolbarbuttonto '<b class="fixed">We've packed a lot of information in this chapter and it will be a useful reference</b>'<br><br>
id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt'<br><br>
 <li>On page 40: '<b class="broken">&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"
 oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;toolbarbutton
 id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 51: '<b class="broken">&lt;decription&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/decription&gt;</b>' has been 
 changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;description&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/description&gt;</b>'<br><br>
 
 </ul>
 
 <a name="ch5">
 <p><b>Chapter 5</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 113: Javascript 1.5 reference link in footnote has been changed from 
 '<b class="broken">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/js/core/jsref15/contents.html</b>' to
 '<b class="fixed">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/index.html?content=javascript.html</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">&lt;/script.</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;/script&gt;</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">dump(l+'\n');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">dump(len+'\n');</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 135: Example 5-11 has been changed to
 <xmp class="fixed">
 <html>
   <head>
     <title>Sound Service Play Example</title>
     <script>  
       function play() { 
         netscape.security.PrivilegeManager.enablePrivilege("UniversalXPConnect"); 
         var sample = Components.classes["@mozilla.org/sound;1"].createInstance(); 
         sample = sample.QueryInterface(Components.interfaces.nsISound); 
         const SND_NETWORK_STD_CID = "@mozilla.org/network/standard-url;1";
         const SND_I_URL           = "nsIURL";
         const SND_URL             = new  C.Constructor(SND_NETWORK_STD_CID, SND_I_URL);
         var url                   = new SND_URL();
         url.spec                  = 'http://jslib.mozdev.org/test.wav';
         sample.play(url);
       } 
     </script>  
   </head>  
   <body>  
     <form name="form">  
       <input type="button" value="Play Sound" onclick="play();">  
     </form>  
   </body>  
 </html>
 </xmp>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 137: '<b class="broken">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1";</b>' has been changed to 
 '<b class="fixed">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1"];</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 140: '<b class="broken">js> load(`chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">js>
 load('chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 </ul>
 
 <a name="ch08">
 <p><b>Chapter 8</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 211: In 2nd sentence of paragraph '<b class="broken">QueryInterace</b>' has been changed to '<b 
 class="fixed">QueryInterface</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 '<b class="broken">mName: "a default value"</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">mName: "a default 
 value",</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4
 
             <xmp class="broken">
               this.myCID,
               "My JS Component",
               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
               location, true, true,
               type);
             </xmp>            
 
 has been changed to
 
             <xmp class="fixed">            
               compMgr.registerComponentWithType(
               this.myCID,
               "My JS Component",
               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
               location, true, true,
               type);
             </xmp>            
 
 <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">dump(" ***** Registering: Simple JS component!
 ****\n");</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 223: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">if (outer != null)</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 239: Example 8-15 has been changed to <br/>
 
 <xmp class="fixed">
 DEPTH         = ../../..
 topsrcdir     = ../../..
 srcdir        = .
 VPATH         = .
 
 include $(DEPTH)/config/autoconf.mk
 
 MODULE        = xpcom
 XPIDL_MODULE  = simple
 LIBRARY_NAME  = simple
 IS_COMPONENT  = 1
 MODULE_NAME   = nsSimpleModule
 REQUIRES      = string \
                 xpcom \
                 $(NULL)
 
 
 CPPSRCS   =              \
     nsSimple.cpp         \
     nsSimpleModule.cpp   \
     $(NULL)
 
 XPIDLSRCS = nsISimple.idl
 
 include $(topsrcdir)/config/config.mk
 
 LIBS    +=        \
     $(XPCOM_LIBS) \
     $(NSPR_LIBS)  \
     $(NULL)
 
 include $(topsrcdir)/config/rules.mk
 
 EXTRA_DSO_LDOPTS += $(MOZ_COMPONENT_LIBS)
 
 install:: $(TARGETS)
 </xmp>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
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 <p><b>Chapter 10</b>  <p><b>Chapter 10</b>
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   <li>On page 297: '<b class="broken">http://www.jslib.mozdev.org</b>' has been changed
   to '<b class="fixed">http://jslib.mozdev.org</b>'<br><br></li>
   </ul>
   
   
<li>In Chapter 10 (p 297) 'http://www.jslib.mozdev.org' has been changed<a name="ch11">
to 'http://jslib.mozdev.org'<br><br><p><b>Chapter 11</b>
   
   <ul> 
   <li>On page 314: In Example 11-5 and Example 11-6 '<b class="broken">var linetext =
   document.createTextNode(messageParagraphs[i]);</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">var linetext =
   document.createTextNode(lines[i]);</b>'<br><br>
 </ul>  </ul>
   
   
Line 77  to 'http://jslib.mozdev.org'<br><br> Line 238  to 'http://jslib.mozdev.org'<br><br>
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Chapter 12 (p 339) A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital<li>On page 336: In Example 12-6
 
 <xmp class="broken">
  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
    print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
 </xmp>
 
 has been changed to (note the difference in indentation and in using a single quote versus a backtick)
 
 <xmp class="fixed">
    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
 </xmp>
 
 <li>On page 339: A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital
 Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a  Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a
 href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>  href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>
   </li>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
Line 89  href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://ce Line 267  href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://ce
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Appendix A (p 365) 'http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml' has been<li>On page 365: '<b class="broken">http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml</b>' has been changed to '<b
changed to 'http://www.mozilla.org/source.html'<br><br>class="fixed">http://www.mozilla.org/source.html</b>'<br><br>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
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