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 <p><b>Corrections</b>  <p><b>Corrections</b>
   
 <p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of  <p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of
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 section on the chapter pages, or send a message to the <a  section on the chapter pages, or send a message to the <a
 href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.  href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.
   
   <p><b>Note:</b> All errors in the text and examples are shown in <b class="broken">red</b> and all corrections are shown in <b
   class="fixed">green</b>.
   
 <a name="preface">  <a name="preface">
 <p><b>Preface</b>  <p><b>Preface</b>
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Preface (p xiv) 'http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/' has been changed<li>On page xiv: '<b class="broken">http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/</b>' has been changed
to 'http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/'<br><br>to '<b class="fixed">http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/</b>'<br><br>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
Line 23  to 'http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozil Line 30  to 'http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozil
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Chapter 1 (p 7) 'applications web built using XPFE' has been<li>On page 7: '<b class="broken">applications web built using XPFE</b>' has been
changed to 'applications built using XPFE'<br><br>changed to '<b class="fixed">applications built using XPFE</b>'<br><br>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
Line 34  changed to 'applications built using XPF Line 41  changed to 'applications built using XPF
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Chapter 2 (p 12) '&lt;window<li>On page 10: Added a new sentence to the end of the 2nd paragraph of the xFly examples sidebar: '<b class="fixed">An installable version
 of the complete xFly application can be found at http://xfly.mozdev.org.</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 12: '<b class="broken">&lt;window
 xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"    xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"  
/&gt;' has been changed to '&lt;window/&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;window
xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;'<br><br>xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>'<br><br>
   
<li>In Chapter 2 (p 14) Removed an extra '>' from example code<br><br><li>On page 14: Removed an extra '<b class="broken">></b>' from example code<br><br>
   
<li>In Chapter 2 (p 17) 'selecting File > Open File > from' has been<li>On page 17: '<b class="broken">selecting File > Open File > from</b>' has been
changed to 'selecting File > Open File from'<br><br>changed to '<b class="fixed">selecting File > Open File from</b>'<br><br>
   
<li>In Chapter 2 (p 20) 'CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function' has been changed<li>On page 20: '<b class="broken">CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function</b>' has been changed
to 'CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function'<br><br>to '<b class="fixed">CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function</b>'<br><br>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
Line 55  to 'CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function'<br Line 65  to 'CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function'<br
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Chapter 3 (p 40) '&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"<li>On page 40: '<b class="broken">&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"
oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt' has been changed to '&lt;toolbarbuttononcommand="doPrint( );" /&gt</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;toolbarbutton
id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt'<br><br>id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt</b>'<br><br>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
   <a name="ch5">
   <p><b>Chapter 5</b>
   
<a name="ch10"><ul>
<p><b>Chapter 10</b>
 <li>On page 113: Javascript 1.5 reference link in footnote has been changed from 
 '<b class="broken">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/js/core/jsref15/contents.html</b>' to
 '<b class="fixed">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/index.html?content=javascript.html</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">&lt;/script.</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;/script&gt;</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">dump(l+'\n');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">dump(len+'\n');</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 135: Example 5-11 has been changed to
 <xmp class="fixed">
 <html>
   <head>
     <title>Sound Service Play Example</title>
     <script>  
       function play() { 
         netscape.security.PrivilegeManager.enablePrivilege("UniversalXPConnect"); 
         var sample = Components.classes["@mozilla.org/sound;1"].createInstance(); 
         sample = sample.QueryInterface(Components.interfaces.nsISound); 
         const SND_NETWORK_STD_CID = "@mozilla.org/network/standard-url;1";
         const SND_I_URL           = "nsIURL";
         const SND_URL             = new  C.Constructor(SND_NETWORK_STD_CID, SND_I_URL);
         var url                   = new SND_URL();
         url.spec                  = 'http://jslib.mozdev.org/test.wav';
         sample.play(url);
       } 
     </script>  
   </head>  
   <body>  
     <form name="form">  
       <input type="button" value="Play Sound" onclick="play();">  
     </form>  
   </body>  
 </html>
 </xmp>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 137: '<b class="broken">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1";</b>' has been changed to 
 '<b class="fixed">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1"];</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 140: '<b class="broken">js> load(`chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">js>
 load('chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 </ul>
 
 <a name="ch08">
 <p><b>Chapter 8</b>
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Chapter 10 (p 297) 'http://www.jslib.mozdev.org' has been changed<li>On page 211: In 2nd sentence of paragraph '<b class="broken">QueryInterace</b>' has been changed to '<b 
to 'http://jslib.mozdev.org'<br><br>class="fixed">QueryInterface</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 '<b class="broken">mName: "a default value"</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">mName: "a default 
 value",</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4
 
             <xmp class="broken">
               this.myCID,
               "My JS Component",
               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
               location, true, true,
               type);
             </xmp>            
 
 has been changed to
 
             <xmp class="fixed">            
               compMgr.registerComponentWithType(
               this.myCID,
               "My JS Component",
               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
               location, true, true,
               type);
             </xmp>            
 
 <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">dump(" ***** Registering: Simple JS component! ****\n");</b>' lines
 has been removed<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 223: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">if (outer != null)</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 239: Example 8-15 has been changed to <br/>
 
 <xmp class="fixed">
 DEPTH         = ../../..
 topsrcdir     = ../../..
 srcdir        = .
 VPATH         = .
 
 include $(DEPTH)/config/autoconf.mk
 
 MODULE        = xpcom
 XPIDL_MODULE  = simple
 LIBRARY_NAME  = simple
 IS_COMPONENT  = 1
 MODULE_NAME   = nsSimpleModule
 REQUIRES      = string \
                 xpcom \
                 $(NULL)
 
 
 CPPSRCS   =              \
     nsSimple.cpp         \
     nsSimpleModule.cpp   \
     $(NULL)
 
 XPIDLSRCS = nsISimple.idl
 
 include $(topsrcdir)/config/config.mk
 
 LIBS    +=        \
     $(XPCOM_LIBS) \
     $(NSPR_LIBS)  \
     $(NULL)
 
 include $(topsrcdir)/config/rules.mk
 
 EXTRA_DSO_LDOPTS += $(MOZ_COMPONENT_LIBS)
 
 install:: $(TARGETS)
 </xmp>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
   
   <a name="ch10">
   <p><b>Chapter 10</b>
   
   <ul>
   <li>On page 297: '<b class="broken">http://www.jslib.mozdev.org</b>' has been changed
   to '<b class="fixed">http://jslib.mozdev.org</b>'<br><br></li>
   </ul>
   
   
 <a name="ch12">  <a name="ch12">
 <p><b>Chapter 12</b>  <p><b>Chapter 12</b>
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Chapter 12 (p 339) A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital<li>On page 336: In Example 12-6
 
 <xmp class="broken">
  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
    print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
 </xmp>
 
 has been changed to (note the difference in indentation and in using a single quote versus a backtick)
 
 <xmp class="fixed">
    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
 </xmp>
 
 <li>On page 339: A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital
 Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a  Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a
 href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>  href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>
   </li>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
Line 90  href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://ce Line 249  href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://ce
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Appendix A (p 365) 'http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml' has been<li>On page 365: '<b class="broken">http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml</b>' has been changed to '<b
changed to 'http://www.mozilla.org/source.html'<br><br>class="fixed">http://www.mozilla.org/source.html</b>'<br><br>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
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