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<p><b>Corrections</b>	<p><b>Corrections</b>

<p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of	<p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of
Line 12 href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">revie	Line 17 href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">revie

<ul>	<ul>

<li>On page xiv: 'http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/' has been changed	<li>On page xiv: '<b class="broken">http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/</b>' has been changed
to 'http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/'<br><br>	to '<b class="fixed">http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/</b>'<br><br>

</ul>	</ul>

Line 23 to 'http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozil	Line 28 to 'http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozil

<ul>	<ul>

<li>On page 7: 'applications web built using XPFE' has been	<li>On page 7: '<b class="broken">applications web built using XPFE</b>' has been
changed to 'applications built using XPFE'<br><br>	changed to '<b class="fixed">applications built using XPFE</b>'<br><br>

</ul>	</ul>

Line 34 changed to 'applications built using XPF	Line 39 changed to 'applications built using XPF

<ul>	<ul>

<li>On page 12: '<window	<li>On page 12: '<b class="broken"><window
xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"	xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"
/>' has been changed to '<window	/></b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed"><window
xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul">'<br><br>	xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"></b>'<br><br>

<li>On page 14: Removed an extra '>' from example code<br><br>	<li>On page 14: Removed an extra '<b class="broken">></b>' from example code<br><br>

<li>On page 17: 'selecting File > Open File > from' has been	<li>On page 17: '<b class="broken">selecting File > Open File > from</b>' has been
changed to 'selecting File > Open File from'<br><br>	changed to '<b class="fixed">selecting File > Open File from</b>'<br><br>

<li>On page 20: 'CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function' has been changed	<li>On page 20: '<b class="broken">CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function</b>' has been changed
to 'CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function'<br><br>	to '<b class="fixed">CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function</b>'<br><br>

</ul>	</ul>

Line 55 to 'CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function'<br	Line 60 to 'CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function'<br

<ul>	<ul>

<li>On page 40: '<toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"	<li>On page 40: '<b class="broken"><toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"
oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt' has been changed to '<toolbarbutton	oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed"><toolbarbutton
id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt'<br><br>	id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt</b>'<br><br>

</ul>	</ul>

Line 67 id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="d	Line 72 id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="d
<ul>	<ul>

<li>On page 113: Javascript 1.5 reference link in footnote has been changed from	<li>On page 113: Javascript 1.5 reference link in footnote has been changed from
'http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/js/core/jsref15/contents.html' to	'<b class="broken">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/js/core/jsref15/contents.html</b>' to
'http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/index.html?content=javascript.html'<br><br>	'<b class="fixed">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/index.html?content=javascript.html</b>'<br><br>

<li>On page 120: '</script.' has been changed to </script>'<br><br>	<li>On page 120: '<b class="broken"></script.</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed"></script></b>'<br><br>

<li>On page 120: 'dump(l+'\n');' has been changed to 'dump(len+'\n');'<br><br>	<li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">dump(l+'\n');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">dump(len+'\n');</b>'<br><br>

<li>On page 137: 'var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1";' has been changed to	<li>On page 137: '<b class="broken">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1";</b>' has been changed to
'var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1"];'<br><br>	'<b class="fixed">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1"];</b>'<br><br>

<li>On page 140: 'js> load(`chrome/jslib/jslib.js');' has been changed to 'js> load('chrome/jslib/jslib.js');'<br><br>	<li>On page 140: '<b class="broken">js> load(`chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">js>
	load('chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>'<br><br>

</ul>	</ul>

Line 86 id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="d	Line 92 id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="d

<ul>	<ul>

<li>On page 211: In 2nd sentence of paragraph 'QueryInterace' has been changed to 'QueryInterface'<br><br>	<li>On page 211: In 2nd sentence of paragraph '<b class="broken">QueryInterace</b>' has been changed to '<b
	class="fixed">QueryInterface</b>'<br><br>

<li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 'mName: "a default value"' has been changed to 'mName: "a default value",'<br><br>	<li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 '<b class="broken">mName: "a default value"</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">mName: "a default
	value",</b>'<br><br>

<li>On page 222: In Example 8-4<br>	<li>On page 222: In Example 8-4

<xmp>	<xmp class="broken">
this.myCID,	this.myCID,
"My JS Component",	"My JS Component",
this.myProgID, fileSpec,	this.myProgID, fileSpec,
Line 100 id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="d	Line 108 id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="d
type);	type);
</xmp>	</xmp>

has been changed to<br>	has been changed to

<xmp>	<xmp class="fixed">
compMgr.registerComponentWithType(	compMgr.registerComponentWithType(
this.myCID,	this.myCID,
"My JS Component",	"My JS Component",
Line 111 has been changed to<br>	Line 119 has been changed to<br>
type);	type);
</xmp>	</xmp>

<li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate 'dump(" *** Registering: Simple JS component! **\n");' lines have been	<li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">dump(" *** Registering: Simple JS component! **\n");</b>' lines
removed<br><br>	has been removed<br><br>

<li>On page 223: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate 'if (outer != null)' lines have been removed<br><br>	<li>On page 223: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">if (outer != null)</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>

<li>On page 239: Example 8-15 has been changed to <br/>	<li>On page 239: Example 8-15 has been changed to <br/>

<xmp>	<xmp class="fixed">
DEPTH = ../../..	DEPTH = ../../..
topsrcdir = ../../..	topsrcdir = ../../..
srcdir = .	srcdir = .
Line 164 install:: $(TARGETS)	Line 172 install:: $(TARGETS)
<p><b>Chapter 10</b>	<p><b>Chapter 10</b>

<ul>	<ul>
<li>On page 297: 'http://www.jslib.mozdev.org' has been changed	<li>On page 297: '<b class="broken">http://www.jslib.mozdev.org</b>' has been changed
to 'http://jslib.mozdev.org'<br><br></li>	to '<b class="fixed">http://jslib.mozdev.org</b>'<br><br></li>
</ul>	</ul>


Line 174 to 'http://jslib.mozdev.org'<br><br></li	Line 182 to 'http://jslib.mozdev.org'<br><br></li

<ul>	<ul>

<li>On page 339: A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital	<li>On page 336: In Example 12-6
Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a
href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>
</li>

<li>(p 336) Use of backtics instead of single quote.	<xmp class="broken">
<xmp>
print ` <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value	print ` <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
print ` <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value	print ` <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
print ` <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value	print ` <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
Should be:	</xmp>
print ' <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
print ' <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value	has been changed to (note the difference in indentation and in using a single quote versus a backtick)

	<xmp class="fixed>
	print ' <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
	print ' <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
print ' <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value	print ' <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
</xmp>	</xmp>

	<li>On page 339: A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital
	Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a
	href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>
</li>	</li>

</ul>	</ul>


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<ul>	<ul>

<li>On page 365: 'http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml' has been	<li>On page 365: '<b class="broken">http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml</b>' has been changed to '<b
changed to 'http://www.mozilla.org/source.html'<br><br>	class="fixed">http://www.mozilla.org/source.html</b>'<br><br>

</ul>	</ul>

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