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<p>This page contains a list of corrections made to the original text of<body><p><b>Corrections</b>
 
 <p>This page contains a list of corrections to be made in the next printing of
 the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors in the text,  the book.  If you have suggestions for changes or find errors in the text,
feel free to post a note below or send a message to the <afeel free open a <a href="bugs.html">bug</a> with a report of the problem, post a message in the User Notes 
 section on the chapter pages, or send a message to the <a
 href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.  href="mailto:reviewers@mozdev.org">reviewers@mozdev.org</a> mailing list.
   
   <p><b>Note:</b> All errors in the text and examples are shown in <b class="broken">red</b> and all corrections are shown in <b
   class="fixed">green</b>.
   
   <a name="preface"></a>
   <p><b>Preface</b>
   
   <ul>
   
   <li>On page ix: '<b class="broken">other browsers such as Galeon and Chimera</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">other browsers 
   such as Galeon and Camino</b>'<br><br>
   
   <li>On page xiv: '<b class="broken">http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/</b>' has been changed
   to '<b class="fixed">http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/</b>'<br><br>
   
   <li>On page xvii: '<b class="broken">David McNamara, and Mark Hammond</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">David 
   McNamara, Mark Hammond, Gary Frederick, and Andreas Halter</b>'<br><br>
   
   <li>On page xvii: '<b class="broken">David Hyatt and Mike Pinkerton for the Chimera browser</b>' has been changed to '<b
   class="fixed">David Hyatt and Mike Pinkerton for the Camino browser</b>'<br><br>
   
   <li>On page xvii: '<b class="broken">including Kim Steckler, Rachel Oeschger, and Priscilla, Dylan, and Devon Collins</b>' has been
   changed to '<b class="fixed">including Kim Steckler, Rachel Oeschger, Marjana Molan, Lia Molan King, and Priscilla, Dylan, and Devon
   Collins</b>'<br><br>
   
   </ul>
   
   
   <a name="ch1"></a>
   <p><b>Chapter 1</b>
   
 <ul>  <ul>
   
<li>In Preface (p xiv) 'http://www.oreilly.com/mozilla/' has been changed<li>On page 2: In sidebar '<b class="broken">like Chimera (an ultra-fast browser that works only on Mac OS X)</b>' has been changed to 
to 'http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/mozilla/'<br><br>'<b class="fixed">like Camino (an ultra-fast browser that works only on Mac OS X)</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 7: In sidebar '<b class="broken">Another project, call m/b (short for mozilla/browser), addresses shortcomings</b>' has
 been changed to '<b class="fixed">The Phoenix project (http://www.mozilla.org/projects/phoenix/) also addresses
 shortcomings</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 7: In sidebar '<b class="broken">Some examples include Chimera (http://chimera.mozdev.org)</b>' has been changed to '<b 
 class="fixed">Some examples include Camino (http://www.mozilla.org/projects/camino/)</b>'<br><br>
   
<li>In Chapter 1 (p 7) 'applications web built using XPFE' has been<li>On page 7: '<b class="broken">applications web built using XPFE</b>' has been
changed to 'applications built using XPFE'<br><br>changed to '<b class="fixed">applications built using XPFE</b>'<br><br>
   
<li>In Chapter 2 (p 12) '&lt;window</ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch2"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 2</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 10: Added a new sentence to the end of the 2nd paragraph of the xFly examples sidebar: '<b class="fixed">An installable version
 of the complete xFly application can be found at http://xfly.mozdev.org.</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 12: '<b class="broken">&lt;window
 xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"    xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"  
/&gt;' has been changed to '&lt;window/&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;window
xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;'<br><br>xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 14: In first code sample from Windows features section, '<b
 class="broken">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"&gt;</b>' has been changed to '<b
 class="fixed">xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 17: '<b class="broken">selecting File > Open File > from</b>' has been
 changed to '<b class="fixed">selecting File > Open File from</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 20: '<b class="broken">CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function</b>' has been changed
 to '<b class="fixed">CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 25: '<b class="broken">Under that directory, create the three new directories, <i>content</i>, <i>locale</i>, and <i>skin</i>, as
 shown in Figure 2-5.' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">Under that directory, create the three new directories, <i>content</i>,
 <i>locale</i>, and <i>skin</i>, as shown in Figure 2-5. The <i>locale</i> directory will have the default 'en-US' language pack
 structure.</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 31: In Example 2-14 '<b class="broken">locale/</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">locale/en-US/</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 32: In Example 2-15 '<b class="broken">locale,install,url,resource:/chrome/xfly/locale/</b>' has been changed to '<b
 class="fixed">locale,install,url,resource:/chrome/xfly/locale/en-US/</b>'<br><br>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch3"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 3</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 34: '<b class="broken">We've packed a lot information in this chapter and it be a useful reference</b>' has been changed
 to '<b class="fixed">We've packed a lot of information in this chapter and it will be a useful reference</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 35: '<b class="broken">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[i];</b>' has been changed to '<b 
 class="fixed">secondLevelNodes[I] = docEl.childNodes[I];</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 40: '<b class="broken">&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"
 oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;toolbarbutton
 id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 51: '<b class="broken">&lt;decription&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/decription&gt;</b>' has been 
 changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;description&gt;The mozdev.org site [...] your own development project&lt;/description&gt;</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On pages 58 and 59: Example 3-15 has been changed to (note the addition of spaces to seperate values)
 
 <xmp class="fixed">
 <?xml version="1.0"?>
 <window id="hello-goodbye"
     title="Hello Goodbye"
     xmlns:html="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
     xmlns="http://www.mozilla.org/keymaster/gatekeeper/there.is.only.xul"
     style="min-width:100px;min-height:100px;background-color:white;">
   <broadcasterset id="broadcasterset">
     <broadcaster id="cmd_hello" oncommand="alert('Hello There!');"/>
   </broadcasterset>
   <keyset id="keyset">
     <key id="key_h" key="H" observes="cmd_hello" modifiers="accel,shift" />
     <key id="key_g" key="G" command="cmd_goodbye" modifiers="accel,shift" />
   </keyset>
   <commandset id="commandset">
     <command id="cmd_goodbye" oncommand="alert('Goodbye!');" />
   </commandset>
   <spacer flex="1"/>
   <label value="hello/goodbye"/>
   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+h"/>
   <textbox value="type ctl+shft+g"/>
   <spacer flex="1"/>
 </window>
 </xmp>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch4"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 4</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 88: '<b class="broken">these are selectors are identical</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">these selectors are 
 identical</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 109: '<b class="broken">The chome URL that the -moz-binding property points to</b>' has been changed to '<b
 class="fixed">The chrome URL that the -moz-binding property points to</b>'<br><br>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch5"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 5</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 113: Javascript 1.5 reference link in footnote has been changed from 
 '<b class="broken">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/js/core/jsref15/contents.html</b>' to
 '<b class="fixed">http://developer.netscape.com/docs/manuals/index.html?content=javascript.html</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">&lt;/script.</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">&lt;/script&gt;</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 120: '<b class="broken">dump(l+'\n');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">dump(len+'\n');</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 135: Example 5-11 has been changed to
 <xmp class="fixed">
 
   <head>
     <title>Sound Service Play Example</title>
     <script>  
       function play() { 
         netscape.security.PrivilegeManager.enablePrivilege("UniversalXPConnect"); 
         var sample = Components.classes["@mozilla.org/sound;1"].createInstance(); 
         sample = sample.QueryInterface(Components.interfaces.nsISound); 
         const SND_NETWORK_STD_CID = "@mozilla.org/network/standard-url;1";
         const SND_I_URL           = "nsIURL";
         const SND_URL             = new  C.Constructor(SND_NETWORK_STD_CID, SND_I_URL);
         var url                   = new SND_URL();
         url.spec                  = 'http://jslib.mozdev.org/test.wav';
         sample.play(url);
       } 
     </script>  
   </head>  
     
     <form name="form">  
       <input type="button" value="Play Sound" onclick="play();">  
     </form>  
 
 </xmp>
 
 <li>On page 137: '<b class="broken">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1";</b>' 
   has been changed to 
 '<b class="fixed">var connection = Components.classes ["@mozilla.org/network/ldap-connection;1"];</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 <li>On page 140: '<b class="broken">js> load(`chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">js>
 load('chrome/jslib/jslib.js');</b>'<br><br>
 </li>
 
 </ul>
 
 <a name="ch06"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 6</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 145: Example 6-1 has been changed to <br/>
 
 <xmp class="fixed">
 var myFile = "xFly.jar";
 initInstall(                      // initialize the installation
   "Install xFly",                 // display name of installation
   "xFly",                         // package name
   "0.0.1",                        // version of install
   1);                             // flags - an optional argument, 
                                   // reserved for future use
 f = getFolder("Chrome");          // specify a target directory
 setPackageFolder(f);
 addFile(myFile);                  // add software to the installation
 registerChrome(
   PACKAGE | DELAYED_CHROME,       // chrome switch (i.e., type)
   getFolder("Chrome","xFly.jar"), // destination of package
   "content/xFly/");               // location of manifest in package
 if (0 == getLastError( ))         // if there have been no errors:
   performInstall( );              // install "xfly.jar"
 else                              // otherwise
   cancelInstall( );               // cancel the installation.
 </xmp>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch08"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 8</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 211: In 2nd sentence of paragraph '<b class="broken">QueryInterace</b>' has been changed to '<b 
 class="fixed">QueryInterface</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 '<b class="broken">mName: "a default value"</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">mName: "a default 
 value",</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4
 
             <xmp class="broken">
               this.myCID,
               "My JS Component",
               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
               location, true, true,
               type);
             </xmp>            
 
 has been changed to
 
             <xmp class="fixed">            
               compMgr.registerComponentWithType(
               this.myCID,
               "My JS Component",
               this.myProgID, fileSpec,
               location, true, true,
               type);
             </xmp>            
 
 <li>On page 222: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">dump(" ***** Registering: Simple JS component!
 ****\n");</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 223: In Example 8-4 one of the duplicate '<b class="broken">if (outer != null)</b>' lines has been removed<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 239: Example 8-15 has been changed to <br/>
 
 <xmp class="fixed">
 DEPTH         = ../../..
 topsrcdir     = ../../..
 srcdir        = .
 VPATH         = .
 
 include $(DEPTH)/config/autoconf.mk
   
<li>In Chapter 2 (p 14) Removed an extra '>' from example code<br><br>MODULE        = xpcom
 XPIDL_MODULE  = simple
 LIBRARY_NAME  = simple
 IS_COMPONENT  = 1
 MODULE_NAME   = nsSimpleModule
 REQUIRES      = string \
                 xpcom \
                 $(NULL)
   
 <li>In Chapter 2 (p 17) 'selecting File > Open File > from' has been  
 changed to 'selecting File > Open File from'<br><br>  
   
<li>In Chapter 2 (p 20) 'CenterWindoOnScreen( ) function' has been changedCPPSRCS   =              \
to 'CenterWindowOnScreen( ) function'<br><br>    nsSimple.cpp         \
     nsSimpleModule.cpp   \
     $(NULL)
   
<li>In Chapter 3 (p 40) '&lt;toolbarbutton id="printBtn" label="Open"XPIDLSRCS = nsISimple.idl
oncommand="doPrint( );" /&gt' has been changed to '&lt;toolbarbutton 
id="printBtn" label="Print" oncommand="doPrint( );" &gt'<br><br> 
   
<li>In Chapter 10 (p 297) 'http://www.jslib.mozdev.org' has been changedinclude $(topsrcdir)/config/config.mk
to 'http://jslib.mozdev.org'<br><br> 
   
<li>In Chapter 12 (p 339) A new 'Certificate Authorities and DigitalLIBS    +=        \
     $(XPCOM_LIBS) \
     $(NSPR_LIBS)  \
     $(NULL)
 
 include $(topsrcdir)/config/rules.mk
 
 EXTRA_DSO_LDOPTS += $(MOZ_COMPONENT_LIBS)
 
 install:: $(TARGETS)
 </xmp>
 
 </ul>
 
 <a name="ch9"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 9</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 257: In Example 9-7
 
 <xmp class="broken">
         <triple subject="?listitem"
                 predicate=" http://xfly.mozdev.org/fly-rdf#location"
                 object="?location"/>
 </xmp>
 
 has been changed to
 
 <xmp class="fixed">
         <triple subject="?listitem"
                 predicate="fly-location#location"
                 object="?location"/>
 </xmp>
 
 </ul>
 
 <a name="ch10"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 10</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 280: In Table 10-3 '<b class="broken">Mostly used for retrieving, datasources, resources, and literals.</b>' has been
 changed to '<b class="fixed">Mostly used for retrieving datasources, resources, and literals.</b>'<br><br>
 
 <li>On page 297: '<b class="broken">http://www.jslib.mozdev.org</b>' has been changed to '<b
 class="fixed">http://jslib.mozdev.org</b>'<br><br>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch11"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 11</b>
 
 <ul> 
 <li>On page 314: In Example 11-5 and Example 11-6 '<b class="broken">var linetext =
 document.createTextNode(messageParagraphs[i]);</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">var linetext =
 document.createTextNode(lines[i]);</b>'<br><br>
 </ul>
 
 
 <a name="ch12"></a>
 <p><b>Chapter 12</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 336: In Example 12-6
 
 <xmp class="broken">
  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
  print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
    print `  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
 </xmp>
 
 has been changed to (note the difference in indentation and in using a single quote versus a backtick)
 
 <xmp class="fixed">
    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op1'].value
    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op2'].value
    print '  <checkbox label="%s" />' % form['op3'].value
 </xmp>
 
 <!--
 <li>On page 339: A new 'Certificate Authorities and Digital
 Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a  Signatures' section is being written with drafts available on <a
 href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>  href="http://certs.mozdev.org">http://certs.mozdev.org</a><br><br>
   </li>
   -->
   
<li>In Appendix A (p 365) 'http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml' has been</ul>
changed to 'http://www.mozilla.org/source.html'<br><br>
 
 <a name="appa"></a>
 <p><b>Appendix A</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 365: '<b class="broken">http://www.mozilla.org/source.tml</b>' has been changed to '<b
 class="fixed">http://www.mozilla.org/source.html</b>'<br><br>
   
 </ul>  </ul>
   
 <br><br>  
   
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 <p><b>Index</b>
 
 <ul>
 
 <li>On page 437: '<b class="broken">Chimera, 2</b>' has been changed to '<b class="fixed">Camino, 2</b>'<br><br>
 
 </ul>
 
 
 <br><br>
   
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