--- bookie/www/index.html	2000/11/27 01:30:30	1.2
+++ bookie/www/index.html	2000/11/27 01:38:23	1.3
@@ -1,14 +1,19 @@
-Bookie is a project born of an itch to make collaborative bookmarking a
-reality.  It was partly conceived out of <a href="http://www.mozilla.org/blue-sky/ui/199805/bookmarks.html">good bookmarking</a> and <a href="http://www.mozilla.org/blue-sky/misc/199805/collaborative-bookmark-index.html">collaborative bookmark indexing</a>.  
+I couldn't stand moving from computer to computer and having to look up
+different bookmarks.  I wanted to be able to search my bookmarks and have
+bookmarks I never used moved out of my way.  I wanted to share my bookmarks
+with someone.  And I wanted total integration with the browser, so I didn't
+have to go through a web interface or a specific bookmarking program.
 
-<h2>Server</h2>
+<p> Bookie is a project born of an itch to make collaborative bookmarking a
+reality.  It was partly conceived out of <a
+href="http://www.mozilla.org/blue-sky/ui/199805/bookmarks.html">good
+bookmarking</a> and <a
+href="http://www.mozilla.org/blue-sky/misc/199805/collaborative-bookmark-index.html">collaborative
+bookmark indexing</a>.
 
-The server is written in Java which sends bookmark information over a
+<p>The server is written in Java which sends bookmark information over a
 protocol to the client.  The server is written and can get bookmarks and
 folders to the client in RDF format.
 
-<h2>Client</h2>
-
-<p>An integration to Mozilla is halfway done.
-
-<p>There is also a debugging client written in Swing.
+<p> An integration to Mozilla is halfway done.  There is also a debugging
+client written in Swing.